That Deceitful Demon

Image credit: Jacqueline Macou via Pixabay

I resent the day that I met her
That demon who wrapped me and weighted me with a fetter
And, oh my god, how willingly I let her
When she said try this on
It’ll make you feel better
She made me into an eager abetter
Now I can’t ever forget her
And that day when I said ‘Let me go’ and how that upset her
It’s all contained in this letter


72 words written for Sammi’s Weekend Writing Prompt: Letter

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CCC070: I Told Her

I told her she ought to eat more
I told her that dieting rubbish would do her no good
I told her
Now look at her
Not a scrap of meat, just a bag of bones
I tell you, it’ll be the death of her

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Crimson’s Creative Challenge #070

Every Wednesday I’ll post FOUR photos (if you want to get a head start you’ll find them marked in that week’s Sunday Picture Post and Tuesday Treats). Lots of choice!

And here they are:

 

You respond with something CREATIVE. Perhaps an  answering photo, or micro-fiction, or a poem, or just a caption

As before, there are only two criteria:

!!!!! Your creative offering is indeed yours !!!!!

!!!!! Your writing is kept to 150 words or less !!!!!

If you post a link in the comments section of this post I’ll be able to find it.

Here’s wishing you inspirational explosions. And FUN

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Tuesday Treats: Colours On A Wet Day

An assortment of images gleaned on 15th January 2026, an overcast, rain-smitten day. Enjoy

15th January 2026

🔼 Never the need to ask the time: Norwich Union has it

15th January 2026

🔼 I wonder the symbolism of these ornate lamppost bases 🔽 And of these bizarre dragons. Both decorate the head office of Norwich Union (now Aviva)

15th January 2026

🔽 A colourful stained glass window lit from within

15th January 2026

15th January 2026

🔼 Why not take a rest on these books? But not when they’re wet 🔽 The niche is an old boot scrapper, at one time every house had one. As to the ‘sculpture’ nestled there, that makes me think of the Roman lares. Maybe its the guardian of the house?

15th January 2026

15th January 2026

Taking photos through shop windows, not something that always works 🔼 A Greek athlete poses in front of a painting of sunrise over a mountain-scape in an antique shop 🔽 A shop of glitter and jangles

15th January 2026

15th January 2026

Market stalls 🔼 Flowers 🔽 Crystal balls

15th January 2026

🔽 How to pass time on a rainy day!

15th January 2026

🔽 These pigeons are surely missing the tidbits and scraps they usually enjoy, here at the top of the market where people sit to eat whatever their choice of fast-food, but not today

15th January 2026

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Words on Writing Issue #2

I don’t like adverts.

The static types are fine. Or at least acceptable. Image. Text. Consume at your leisure. No, I mean those irritating inconsiderate interruptions that blare out twice as loud as anything you’re watching.

Not that I watch TV. Haven’t had a tele since the 1990s. YouTube on my laptop serves that function, though I don’t spend much time watching. But there are some documentaries, and certain videos. But whatever I’m watching, those unwanted ads are the pits.

There’s one in particular which has me grinding my teeth. It’s not terrifically loud and it’s not obnoxious, not really. But its message is based on a false premise. It’s for Reedsy.com: “The Best Editors Are On Reedsy.”

I don’t doubt the truth of that. But I do doubt their stated reason for the failure of self-published books. The ad doesn’t actually say that self-published books are badly edited, with ill-conceived covers. But it does imply that’s the reason they don’t sell. “They should have used Reedsy.”

I read a lot of self-published books. I’ve never found fault with their editing, neither developmental nor line editing. And believe me, I can be very picky. That’s not the reason self-published books fail. Lack of marketing is. And marketing is extremely difficult, and ultimately ineffective, without an adequate budget. And boundless energy. And a wide network of contacts.

Apologies for the rather long introduction, but it has delivered us to my problem.

How do I find a readership for my books?

I’m not looking for sales. I’m happy to give them away. Epubs. PDFs. Whatever.

But… here’s the main problem, first noticed when I uploaded The Spinner’s Game to Amazon/KDP back in 2020. Genre.

I write mythic fantasy.

Or do I?

In The Spinner’s Game, the protagonist and most of the main characters are banished divines. In our western culture that translates as fallen angels. Yet key-in fallen angels and Amazon will show you Paranormal Romance, Gothic Erotica or Paranormal Thrillers. That’s not what I write. Nothing like what I write.

Medieval churchmen believed that elves were fallen angels. Tolkien writes about elves. But if you search on Amazon for elves, you’ll find LOTR fanfic and high fantasy. If you search for fae, you’ll come up with stories based on Celtic folklore and/or mythology. Or, again, Paranormal Romance, Gothic Erotica or Paranormal Thrillers. That’s not what I write.

My banished divines do not conform to this image.

And I don’t write romances, or thrillers.

My stories are closer to whodunits but set in an ancient land that could have existed – if we don’t follow too closely two centuries of archaeological findings. A whodunit peopled in part by banished divines. But again, search for whodunits and you’re not going to find anything like my stories.

Back to this problem of mythic fantasy.

Quote from Servicescape’s ‘book-genre-encyclopedia’

“This subgenre of fantasy draws heavily from myth to create a unique blend of fantasy and folklore. It often includes gods or goddesses as characters or could be a retelling of older myths set in a fantasy world or the real world.”

I don’t draw on myths and neither do I retell them. But my stories are inspired by them. I like to twist them, turn them around, imagine the circumstances that resulted in this or that myth. And while within my created worlds there are myths, they’re not the myths that we know now. Maybe I do draw on myths?

Do my stories include deities as characters? I have to say yes to that, though neither the character nor the reader might know it. But the clues are there if you search.

Yet I doubt those readers of the mythic fantasies listed on Amazon would be satisfied with my non-conformist stories.

Could I list my books under a different genre? If so, which genre?

From the same Servicescape’s ‘book-genre-encyclopedia’:

Magical Realism “… refers to magic or the supernatural that is presented in an otherwise real-world or mundane setting.”

That does seem to cover it. Magical realism – but prehistorically set.

Yet that fails to cover the mythic element.

And now my head is whirling.

Perhaps I can solve this by listing my books under both Mythic Fantasy and Magical Realism? Overall, I think this self-discussion has gotten me nowhere.

Perhaps by the time I need to state my genre again, I’ll have unravelled the confusion. That won’t be until summer when I’m thinking of opening a Pinterest account (my head’s too busy at present to take on more).

I thank you for reading, and I’ll thank you again if you share your thoughts on any of this.

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Sunday Picture Post: City Streets

15th January 2026, we decide to do a ‘city walk’, our intention to follow the river that flows through the city – with the Wensum swans, the cathedral, green lawns and willows. But the weather destroys that hope. The forecast predicts heavy rain by 11:00 am. Arriving in Norwich at 8:30, we decide best is to keep closer to shops and cafes, plenty of places to shelter. So, here we go. Please join us

15th January 2026

🔼 Arriving at the bus station, we’re greeted by the stately head office of the former Norwich Union (now Aviva) 🔽 We decide to circle around the city centre, just beyond the newer shops, where the buildings have more character

15th January 2026

15th January 2026

🔼 Trees, rather bare at this time of year, but I like the patterns made by these white birch 🔽 In Chapel Field Gardens, a very old, very large, plane tree

15th January 2026

15th January 2026

A palimpsest of styles from different ages 🔼 A lane off St Giles, within a stone’s throw of the City Hall 🔽 ⏬ Tucked away off St Benedicts Street. Edging the river, here the Anglo-Saxons first settled

15th January 2026

15th January 2026

🔽 We glimpse the cathedral’s spire. But no time to explore that section of city. Rain drops are beginning to wet our heads

15th January 2026

15th January 2026

🔼 Into the main shopping centre now, my camera attracted by the reflections 🔽 Another collection of architectural styles, dictated by the years of their crafting

15th January 2026

15th January 2026

🔼 There’s no denying it now. Rain falls as we reach the market 🔽 Top of the market, eyes fixed on the magnificent church of St Peter Mancroft, here we will shelter

15th January 2026

Hope you enjoyed this somewhat different theme to our walks, dictated by the recent weather. Spring will return with flowers and sun. Until then, I continue to seek suitable subjects for my camera.

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A Rhythm With Clear Intent

Image credit: Talie Scrap vie Pixabay

Erspne threw and Detah caught
It wrenched her wrist, so awkward that
Not large, not small
Could have been Haldalda’s cook pot
Except those holes beneath its rim
There to secure the skin
Around its belly two rows of triangles
Advertised the rhythm’s intent
Upward pointing, downward dipping
A drum for raising sexual ferment


54 words written for Sammi’s Weekend Writing Prompt: Drum

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CCC069: Blessed Is She

How blessed is she, our sun
Who every day’s end must descend
Into that Otherworld beneath our own
To spend the night becharmed in her lover’s arms

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Crimson’s Creative Challenge #069

Every Wednesday I’ll post FOUR photos (if you want to get a head start you’ll find them marked in that week’s Sunday Picture Post and Tuesday Treats). Lots of choice!

And here they are:

You respond with something CREATIVE. Perhaps an  answering photo, or micro-fiction, or a poem, or just a caption

As before, there are only two criteria:

!!!!! Your creative offering is indeed yours !!!!!

!!!!! Your writing is kept to 150 words or less !!!!!

If you post a link in the comments section of this post I’ll be able to find it.

Here’s wishing you inspirational explosions. And FUN

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Tuesday Treats: Snips and Snaps

An odd collection of photos taken on our ‘Walk Into The Night’ on 5th August 2022. Enjoy

5th August 2022

🔼 Something about angles always attracts my lens!

5th August 2022

🔼 It’s summer, let’s celebrate those berries 🔽 and enjoy the dance of sunlight over the waving grasses ⏬ and admire the fresh green reeds standing proud

5th August 2022

5th August 2022

🔽 Could you resist the click?

5th August 2022

5th August 2022

🔼 Dolphins in various states of decay 🔽 It’s a nautical term dating to 1700s

5th August 2022

5th August 2022

The path alongside Breydon Water is lined with flowering plants 🔼 Tansy 🔽 Mugwort and the architectural seed heads of Alexanders

5th August 2022

5th August 2022

When the sun is gone 🔼🔽

5th August 2022

Hope you enjoyed this walk back in time

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