Seed Fall Ch43

Chapter Forty-Three of my current wip. As before, all and any comments very much appreciated

Please note: This is a weekly post

Jess had already faced the problem of what to do with a dead body when Poalt died. A new problem, requiring much thought. For whether in the mines, the manufactories, or within the GM Programme it was the Techs dealt with death. They took away the body and left the Monza to grieve. Or not. Having already lost their twin, the Monzas on the GM Programme were seldom affected by a clutch-mate’s demise. But how the Techs dealt with that body, Jess didn’t know.

He had observed various strategies amongst the various breeding pools on the various planets. Yet in all places, there was one constant. The dead was removed from the living. But first the innards were removed and the bulk of it buried. But with the dead companion’s life-force being strong in the blood, the group then consumed the heart and-or the liver. Though in some breed-pools, that heart was consumed by a specially lit fire. Jess was disinclined to enact this rite with Poalt. He doubted any would want to consume what remained of his life force. Besides, he had died of a virulent venom.

Regards the dead one’s remains, treatment varied. The corpse might be buried, or wedged in some high place, or secreted away in a cave. Or burned. With the former treatments, bones might later be gathered by the group for whatever their purposes. With all but one group he’d observed, all the dead person’s belongings were also treated as dead.

When Poalt died, the question Jess had to resolve, and fast, was how to separate his dead body from his clutch. He didn’t so much discuss this with Cela-Byi as to ponder it aloud.

“Make of it an offering to the shore dragons,” she said.

Jess had seen the way those dragons tore into flesh. He shuddered at the thought of that happening to Poalt. Yet Poalt wasn’t alive in that body. Where his spirit had gone, Jess didn’t know. Still, he objected, “That flesh is tainted with venom.”

“Banmakka venom. It harms no Byi-kin.”

So that’s what Jess did with Poalt’s body. He took it by flier to the shore, close but not too close to the dragons’ burrows, and laid the lifeless body on the sand. And quickly retreated. That was one feeding frenzy he didn’t want to see.

Now here was another death.

Kookka slumped beside Jess on the soft seat in the front-cell, leaned far forward, head in his hands but not weeping. “I feel so wretched with guilt.”

Jess said nothing but allowed his friend the space to talk. And what could he say? That he too felt guilty.

“I didn’t want her. She wasn’t to me like Cela-Byi is to you. No affection, she just…drew me into her. Baby-bumping cock,” Kookka growled his anger at his anatomy.

Jess rested a calming hand on Kookka’s back.

“The screams…” Kookka shuddered and hung his head. “Never ending, they’ll haunt me. I as good as killed her so Antel says.”

Jess knew exactly what Antel said. That a Monza foetus grew too fast for the Itamakki womb. That there was a discordance between the two species not yet overcome by the Techs’ GM Programme. And Jess too had seeded a foetus. How long before Cela-Byi also died. Kookka mightn’t weep, but he would. He would miss her far more than he ever missed his sister Jilly.

“There was blood,” Kookka said. “So much blood. Antel says that’s what killed her, that she lost so much blood. Don’t mistake me, Jess. I might talk like I’m grieving but, truth, in many more ways I’m relieved that she’s gone. I didn’t want her. I didn’t. Truth, she was an evil cat, verbal claws always raking your Cela. Trying to turn Segul against her too. She didn’t want to be here. She hated us.”

Jess left Kookka to hang his head while he stood in the hive’s doorway and gazed out at their rocky base. What to do? Take Tawan’s body back to Toki-dow, to her family, her people? If that, then it must be done this day. He couldn’t allow death to remain this close to the living. And where was Segul? She would be grieving, of course she would. But where was she?

He found her in the front-cell of Cela-Byi’s hive, with Joel.

Jess spread his hands, his arms, in helpless gesture and hoped one of these three might help him. But Segul didn’t even look up, her head buried in Joel’s embrace. She was sobbing, her body shaking.

“I have to move her,” Jess said – to Joel, to Cela-Byi. “We must cleanse the hive. Segul is best to stay here for now. Does that suit?”

“Where will you take her?” Cela-Byi asked.

He lifted a shoulder, hoping she’d say.

“Not to the dow,” she said. “You heard what Anji-Tiki-ta said. They both belong to this god-hill now.”

“I can’t do with her what we did with Poalt,” he said. “Can’t you ask Segul? What does she want done? What’s the way with your people?”

“There’s a cave. Close to the dow. But Tiki-ta has forbidden it.”

“What about your cave, the dragon cave?”

Segul hadn’t spoken, hadn’t looked up, hadn’t stopped sobbing. But now she did shake her head. They waited for her to speak.

“Kuca-house, we’re cat-spirit.” Her words were thick with her crying. “She should return to our spirit-kin. I show you where.”

“I’ll take her,” Joel said.

Jess didn’t argue with that, glad to have that duty taken from him.

As soon as left alone with Cela-Byi in her hive he scooped her into his arms and held her so close her heart hammered next to his own. “I’m worried,” he whispered into her hair. “I’m so very worried for you. If you—”

“Hush. Don’t speak it. Best not think it. We enjoy what time we have. And maybe it won’t happen to me. I tell same to Joel.”

“Is Segul—?”

“Not yet. But he wanted not to be with her, not ever to bump her. And that would hurt them both more than to face this possible death. Same as us, I could not be without you.”

“But—”

“Hush. One death is not all deaths. One woman is not all women.”

But she hadn’t seen those bones in that cave. All those women. All with babies. Was that how they died? Yet she had seen the drawing. He asked her if the Itamakku had any stories of women disappearing, many of them all together.

She drew away from him. “One day, our stories tell, a star-spirit waded out of the sea. It was Nozim, the sea-goat. And he herded the women – not all of them, only the young – and took them out to sea and never were they seen again. Unless they be sea-sprites.”

Continues on Monday

Thank you for reading. Hope you enjoyed

Your comment will be most welcome

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Sunday Picture Post: Wensum Valley, Ringland Hills

12th November 2025, the forecast given is dull and dreary with light rain at least until lunchtime. Regardless, we hop a bus to Norwich and another bus out to the furthest reaches of Costessey. We’re following the course of the river Wensum out to Ringland. Please, do come with us. And enjoy

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🔼The rain stops as we leave the new-build residential area where the bus has dropped us. A weak sun tries to peer through the clouds.  🔽 Along the lane are secluded houses, built long before I walked this lane in my teens. The sun tries harder to shine on us. Promises…

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12th November 2025

🔼 Iconic. Everyone knows this cottage. The lane crosses its river frontage 🔽 where we’re guaranteed a sighting of swans

12th November 2025

🔽 The lane is narrow, fringed with tall trees. Beyond a green field the copper of fallen leaves carpet the private part of Ringland Hills

12th November 2025

12th November 2025

🔼 Into the woods. But where are the paths? Hidden beneath a depth of fallen leaves 🔽⏬ With so much ivy and several holly trees, it’s gotten dark in here. And the sun has forsaken us

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12th November 2025

12th November 2025

🔼🔽 Ah. Paths!

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12th November 2025

🔼 Back to the lane 🔽 This junction alerts us, we’re almost into Ringland, where there’s a pub, surprisingly called The Swan. Food awaits us

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Hope you enjoyed. We did!

Lots of pretty piccies in this week’s Tuesday Treats, and fungi, of course, on Friday

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Like Siblings

Image credit: Roy Buri on Pixabay

Like siblings they share a name
Like siblings they’re not the same
Like siblings one’s older
And perforce the other is younger
The elder throughout the lengthy years
Has produced a magnificent magnum opus to enchant listening ears
The younger, though not long begun
Through tireless hammering has filled shelves kilometres-long
Two keyboards, different yet both entertaining worldwide


58 words written for Sammi’s Weekend Writing Prompt: Keyboard

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Friday Fungi

More fungi photos from our walk on 30th October 2025. Enjoy

As usual, if I’m not sure I will not name. And mostly, I’m not sure

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30th October 2025

🔼 Wow, here’s one I can name (but only because I checked with someone). This is the infamous ‘Hen-of-the-woods’. But it’s an aged hen.

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30th October 2025

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30th October 2025

🔼 Another I can name. It’s a stinkhorn. A young, newly emerged stinkhorn

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🔼🔽 I’ve included these two to show how these fungi are usually found. Not all nice and waving a flag to say ‘Here I am’.

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30th October 2025

30th October 2025

🔼🔽 Tawny grisette (Amanita fulva). In the photo above you can see its egg

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30th October 2025

🔼 I’d like to give this a definitive name. I cannot. But everything about it shouts Amanita. Yet which one? It’s stipe (stalk) is too dark to be Fly Agaric, it’s clinging veil too busy to be an orange grisette.

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🔽 Almost certainly an Aniseed Funnel. Almost certainly

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That’s all for now, folks. I’ve no idea what I might find for you next week. We’ll have to wait and see.

Hope you enjoyed

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CCC060: The Cobbler’s Gold

Beneath the tree a squat cottage grew
As if out of the earth
A native dwelling for a native man
The man had the look of one grown out of that soil
Short and gnarly
Like a beech tree’s roots
He earned his bread and milk, his butter and cheese
By making shoes, and repairing these
And every year on Halloween
Folks came hunting his fabled gold
As if he really did exist in this world
The Little Leprechaun Man

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Crimson’s Creative Challenge #060

Every Wednesday I’ll post FOUR photos (if you want to get a head start you’ll find them marked in that week’s Sunday Picture Post and Tuesday Treats). Lots of choice!

And here they are:

You respond with something CREATIVE. Perhaps an  answering photo, or micro-fiction, or a poem, or just a caption

As before, there are only two criteria:

!!!!! Your creative offering is indeed yours !!!!!

!!!!! Your writing is kept to 150 words or less !!!!!

If you post a link in the comments section of this post I’ll be able to find it.

Here’s wishing you inspirational explosions. And FUN

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Tuesday Treats: Yay! Colour

An assortment of various photos, including some fungi, from our walk on 30th October 2025. Enjoy

30th October 2025

🔼 Chestnut leaves refusing to leave the tree 🔽 Beech leaves, not old enough yet to let go

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30th October 2025

🔼 Mountain ash, aka rowan 🔽 and gorse, in flower

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30th October 2025

🔼 We found a beech tree with golden leaves glowing in the sun. Yay!

As usual, I don’t name the fungi if I’m not sure. And mostly I’m not sure!

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30th October 2025

🔼Birch Polypore, ubiquitous with so many birch trees here 🔽 I really must learn this one’s name, for we find it often amongst pine and birch

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30th October 2025

🔼 A bracket. But there are so many brackets and many of them look much the same. I like this one for it’s fuzziness! 🔽 And puff balls, all puffed out!

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🔽 The last of today’s fungi. But who can say its name when the sun is dazzling our lens. I include it because I love that colour

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🔽 And before you leave this wonderful place, for your convenience…

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I hope you enjoyed. More fungi on Friday

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Seed Fall Ch42

Chapter Forty-Two of my current wip. As before, all and any comments very much appreciated

Please note: This is a weekly post

To satisfy Kookka, Jess put his mind to learning the Itamakku ways. First, he would learn the star-beasts.

It didn’t surprise him that these were the Itamakku names for the constellations that encircled this planet, Ayin. The said ‘star-seats’ referred to the constellation rising on the eastern horizon at daybreak. These cyclic risings gave the Itamakku their annual calendar.

When star-monkey Tiki sat on the star-seat the rain cascaded down from the darkest clouds. But only in the mornings. From midday the clouds moved away, and the sun dried the thin soil around the base. Then Jess followed Cela-Byi down the precipitous hill and into the forest where to the west were many wide glades now grown green with plants heavy with seeds. In just one glade there might be twenty species of plants that yielded edible seeds. Cela-Byi told him their names but…plants weren’t his skill. He helped her to pound the seeds.

“Star-men know nothing that’s not god-given,” she said. And they both knew she referred to the Techs. “Not know how to make bread to fill belly unless Tech-trained caterers.”

Jess couldn’t deny it.

“And how make your jackets and legs? Not woven from fibres as are the grey sheets. God-knowledge.”

She said it in mock and all Jess could do was to nod. Truth. And Kookka wanted them to leave the Monza. They’d be dead within a moon cycle.

As Tiki moved from the star-seat, so the star-spirit fish, Sarbi, took its place.

“No more wet stars,” Cela-Byi said. Which wasn’t quite the truth but now the rain fell only as light showers.

That same day, just as the star-spirits changed seats, so the Itamakku again arrived at the base. No small party this.

“I see chiefs of three dows here,” Cela-Byi reached up on tiptoes to whisper into Jess’s ear. “Greal, Robi and Toki.”

The chiefs were easily identified even without their ornate hats, their feathers and ropes of shells and beads. But although those chiefs bore the same sharp weapons as their men, they didn’t chant and rap those shafts on the ground. The chanting and rapping stopped when Anji-Tiki-ta held aloft his spear.

“Star-man Zem Jess, we speak with you.”

Jess stepped forward. Cela-Byi tried to follow him, but he gestured for Kookka to hold her back. His obs were ranged behind him, the operatives pressing to see what was happening. Most were now able to understand the Itamakku speech, if not yet fluent in speaking it. One had stubbornly refused to learn it. Canipse. No surprise there.

“I greet you, Anji-Tiki-ta,” Jess said with a slight nod of his head. “Again, you trespass. I ask what is your need.”

“You take our women and this we allow for through you they gain god-given knowledge. But now you slight us. This aggrieves us, this causes deaths. These deaths you must remedy.”

Jess spread his hands. He didn’t understand. How had his Monzas slighted the Itamakku, how caused their deaths?

The Greal chief upjutted his chin. “The Banmakka receive god-given food from your northern god-hill. We receive nothing although Greal-dow is also in north.”

Jess cast a look back for Saker who, in the absence of Canipse, had taken on the task of distributing the excess tubers to the Banmakka. “When next you distribute, ensure Greal-dow is included.”

“And Robi-dow,” said the third chief.

“And Robi-dow,” Jess repeated. “Though likely by the time star-spirit Kija sits on the star-seat our tuber harvest will be depleted. Until next year.”

The Itamakku, as one, grunted and nodded, which Jess took as acceptance.

“Now,” Anji-Tiki-ta said, “as to the deaths. Three Itamakki. We cannot say of the Banmakka. That is for them to make claim. Three star-men you give us and no more trouble from us.”

Jess slowly rubbed his palms across his knuckles. He frowned, lips indrawn. There were no Techs to consult, to take over and sort out this mess. He glanced at Armar, but Armar looked away. He looked round at Kookka. Might Kookka have some advice to say? No, there was just him as the zem, and all waited on him.

“Three star-men to give you,” he repeated Anji-Tiki-ta’s demand. “To give to you for you to do what? To replace the dead men in their dow, in their house, in their bed? But such would make a poor recompense. My star-men know nothing of your ways, they have no appropriate skills.”

“God-knowledge,” the Greal chief said, an eyebrow excessively raised.

At least that answered that the Itamakku didn’t want to kill the Monza. He looked again at Kookka. Would Kookka volunteer, so keen to join the Itamakku? But Kookka gave no indication. He looked round at the ops and obs. He could not command such a sacrifice.

“These Itamakku dead, they had women? They had children? They were skilful hunters, warriors?”

“They were not best,” Anji-Tiki-ta said. “Best would not be dead.”

“But they had women?” This might encourage his Monzas to volunteer.

“None with a child. All young women, now without men. Without your star-men they too will die.”

Jess took a deep breath and plunged in, to what he hoped might be a solution. “Bring those women here. We give them god-knowledge, we give them life.”

Armar grabbed his arm as he turned back to the hives. “Are you crazy? Three more women? And these bonded to no one? That’s trouble waiting to erupt.”

Jess calmly pried the fingers from his arm. “You want that I pick out three of our clutch and send them off to the dows to…to what? Maybe you and Antel would like to go? Would you prefer that?”

He grabbed Cela-Byi’s hand and strutted back to his hive. He seldom took Cela-Byi in that hive, but this day he did. “Have I done right?”

“I not understand what you said with Armar,” she said. “Except he is angry.”

“He thinks it unwise to invite those women here.”

“A replacement man in a dow…?” She shook her head, her face glum. “They give him nasty tasks no other wants. He has no honour. If no baby takes in two, three years, likely they kill and find for the woman another.”

“Then I made the right choice.”

The domestic operatives Murry and Tyrim erected yet another hive although it was another eight days before the women arrived. Nozim and Sarbi from Robi-dow, Naba from Greal. It was decided not to preface their names with Li, this word merely meaning woman. It pleased Jess that Cela-Byi befriended them. Maybe Segul would befriend them too, given time. But never Tawan for she was soon dead.

Continues Monday

Thank you for reading. I hope you enjoyed

Comments always welcomed

 

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Sunday Picture Post: Autumnal Trees

30th October 2025, a day of dazzling sun. So we hop the bus to Norwich and head off to Mousehold Heath, that wonderful tree-grown heath with its precipitously-sided former quarries where fungi tend to show themselves around about now. I apologise in advance for the trees, trees and more trees. Please do join us, I’m sure you’ll enjoy…

30th October 2025

🔼 Standing at the edge of Mousehold Heath provides the best ever view over the city of Norwich. Although this is the last photo taken, I’m using it to preface the post and help set the scene. 🔽 One of the many sharp bends on the road out of the city and up to the heath; they help to keep the gradient ‘easy’. Here we’re blinded by that dazzling sunlight

30th October 2025

30th October 2025

🔼🔽 The heath is divided by that twisty-turny road (above). We enter the east side first, because we know there we’ll be walking along this wonderful beech-lined avenue. There are still plentiful tenacious leaves on the trees, but also a wonderful copper carpet

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30th October 2025

🔼 Into the western side of the heath, many of the trees are more recently established; areas of sparkling light as the sun catches the young birch bark, undergrown with the coppery fronds of bracken 🔽 But in a sunny glade are older birches with their gnarly barks

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30th October 2025

🔼 In places the trees stand aside to allow wide walks and, even, a small playing field 🔽 in other places the trees climb the former quarry sides

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30th October 2025

🔼 At the highest point a gorse-covered heathland spreads out, birches and oak trees hugging the outer path. There are benches here, a pleasant place to rest awhile 🔽

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30th October 2025

🔼🔽 Back to the ‘valleys’ where we look up as the sun glances down and plays havoc with the focus

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That’s all for today. I hope you enjoyed. More photos on Tuesday (including a few fungi) and of course, Friday Fungi

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All Mixed Up

Image credit: Bridgesward on Pixabay

Remember that ‘The Devil Wears Prada’ scene with the blue belt? Watching that movie, my thoughts drifted to my art student days. Tight on funds, I learned to mix ANY colour from a basic palette.

Now, there’s two ways to go: White with a dab of ultramarine and perhaps yellow ochre. Or cobalt and drown it with white. Cobalt being the cheaper, that’s the way I’d go if I wanted to mix cerulean.


73 words written for Sammi’s Weekend Writing Prompt: Cerulean

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