How I Write

Teddy insisted I remove the plug-in keyboard cos, he said, it’s not comfy to sit on

Such a vast subject. Let’s apply some structure.

The Basics: Equipment.

I like to sit at a desk and use a laptop and MS Word. But I don’t use the laptop keyboard. I have a plug-in which clatters most satisfactorily, reminiscent of the Brother typewriter I started my writing life on.

But I also keep a notebook and a supply of biros handy. Black. Fine point. These are for jotting down those numerous amendments as I realise they’re needed.

Also, I’ll sit comfy on the sofa and write copious notes on the story, where it’s going, what’s changing, is it working.

Then also there are notes from various levels of research. Research might include how to make gunpowder, the possible geography, climate, wildlife of my story’s location, and how to treat a Komodo dragon’s venomous bite.

I don’t have a komodo dragon but I do have a frog

Also, at this stage I try to compose a one-sentence pitch of what the story’s about:

Seed FallWhen the mind-controlling techs of a G.M. Programme on an alien planet are drowned, the tech-hating basecamp overseer must take on their role.

Note: This can/will change several times during the writing process.

The First Draft

Am I a plotter or a pantser? As with many writers, I’m a bit of both.

I spend an age working on the plot in my head. At some point I’ll start to make notes and later I’ll fit said notes into some kind of structure: three acts with the major plot points. I usually develop the story further from there and I’ll note the protagonist’s Character Arc.

But being an impatient soul, I seldom complete that plotting process. Chapters are not mapped out, nor are the scenes. At this stage if I’ve written an outline it’s soon abandoned. I flex my fingers, connect my head, and start on the tapping.

Ah, bliss. Satisfaction. And away the story runs with the characters doing what characters do.

Found this pic in my archives. Thought bubbles?

After a morning’s writing in like manner, I’m on the comfy sofa, notebook and pen in hand, trying to apply structure to the mess my characters have just made of my previously structured plot. This usually – always? – includes new twists and turns, an adjusted story arc, and maybe even a completely new and previously unimagined ending.

And so it goes.

Dust and Clean Up

Around about halfway through the story I’ll do a bit of a dust and clean up. As far as Seed Fall is concerned, so far this has been decapitalising words that should have been lowercase and feeding in some foreshadowing.

First Draft 2nd Half

By now I know where my story is going and how it’s going to get there. The ending might still be fuzzy and if anyone asks me about the theme I doubt I can answer. So far, on this story, I have a single word: Responsibility.

Found this in the archives and thought it looked kinda spacey

As I get to know the characters the dialogue might/will change, reflecting this. Character arcs can change, too. In fact, the completed First Draft might not resemble the story that floated around in my head at the start and kept me awake nights wanting to be written. That’s why on completion of the first draft there follows many revisions.

First Draft Seed Fall New Weekly Posting

All of which might go some way to easing your reading of the story which, as of next week, I shall be posting weekly.

 

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Sunday Picture Post: Corton Woods

14th March 2025, the weather being fair, we hopped a bus, and hopped off again just south of our county border. Our destination? Two very different woods of Gunton and Corton. Last week I posted photos from Gunton Woods. This week it’s the turn of Corton. Enjoy

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🔼A field, a former railway line (see bridge above), and a cafe divides the two woods. 🔽Then it’s an oh and ah, and isn’t this a pretty pond. It does grow water lilies, but not this early

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🔼A seat is provided for whiling away the sunny hours while watching the ducks on the pond, of which there are none this day

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If Gunton woods is all about flowers, Corton is all about trees! 🔼🔽At this time of year, only the moss, the holly and the ivy provide any green

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🔼Oh, watch out! For here be dragons

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🔼And big fat beech trees🔽

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And so we make our way to the exit…where we find fungi (see Tuesday Treats)

Hope you enjoyed all these naked limbs. Join us next week for another walk ‘South of the Border’ 😉😎😊

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Take Flight

26th March 2025

A tad out of focus I’ll grant you, but that’s cos they zoomed over our heads and soon were gone. But without a doubt that does show Movement, one of the titles provided by Maria for her 2025 Pic of the Month

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What Jollification

Image from Public Domain vis Pixabay

What delights
What jollification
The day that good sense
Was restored to the nation
Street parties erupted in every residential street
Tables swathed with sugary sweets
Flavoursome foods produced in a flash
And such good behaviour, no piling of trash
Just heartfelt unanimous celebration
The day that good sense was restored
To this ailing nation
Dancing, singing, even highland flinging
And the church didn’t declare this revelry was sinning


69 words written for Sammi’s Weekend Writing Prompt: Revel

 

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CCC027: The Spirit

Deep in the tree
That’s where the spirit will be
The spirit that speaks to me
Is it an elf?
A gnome or a fairy?
No, I believe that spirit’s my Self

 

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Crimson’s Creative Challenge #027

Every Wednesday I’ll post FOUR photos (if you want to get a head start you’ll find them marked in that week’s Sunday Picture Post and Tuesday Treats). Lots of choice!

And here there are:

You respond with something CREATIVE. Perhaps an  answering photo, or micro-fiction, or a poem, or just a caption

As before, there are only two criteria:

!!!!! Your creative offering is indeed yours !!!!!

!!!!! Your writing is kept to 150 words or less !!!!!

If you post a link in the comments section of this post I’ll be able to find it.

Here’s wishing you inspirational explosions. And FUN

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Tuesday Treat: Spring!

14th March 2025 we visited Gunton Woods. Here’s some mostly flowery details. Enjoy

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Primroses in abundance, yet not all of them fully formed. This one we found hiding away in the bushes. Above it was this delightful cherry blossom holding onto a droplet from the overnight rain 🔽

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Great though it is to see new life, when the sun shines through old leaves it gives us this 🔼 and this🔽

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And this 🔽

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Snowdrops and daffodils, all a bit bedewed with last night’s rain

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More cherries. After bewailing the lack last week, suddenly they’re everywhere. What a difference a day (or a week) makes

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Now for something completely different. The rich colouring of ivy berries

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And fungi!

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Finally, to sing us on our way. a Great Tit

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Hope you enjoyed. More next week

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Seed Fall Chapter10

Chapter Ten of my current wip. As before, all and any comments very much appreciated

Jess watched with approval as Joel brought the flier down, barely skimming the evergreen canopy that covered this side of the island.

“Hey,” Kookka growled at him. “Have a care. Those trees could hide volcanoes.”

“It’s true,” Jess said. “Though unlike those to north of basecamp, not active. Ancient volcanoes underlie everywhere here. Every hill and mountain, once an active volcano else volcanically raised. Never known such a place.”

“And the Sanki choose to live here?” Joel asked him. “Don’t they realise how dangerous?”

“The Techs brought them here,” Jess relayed some of what he had learned in the Briefing. He himself had been on this planet before that move, when the only breed-pool had been confined to the landmass now labelled as Four.

Kookka nodded towards a swathe of trees. “No water source here, you say?”

“That’s the report from a hundred years back. Maybe they were surveyed at the height of the dry season?”

Kookka grunted agreement. “Our breed-pool aren’t like flora to hide life in their seeds. Nor those ‘nasties’ found under rocks. They need year-round water.”

Even so, when Jess had Joel bring the flier close to the southern shore his eyes remained alert. A lot could happen in 100 years. Though in his experience, the less developed the breed-pool, the less they moved of their own accord. The coast here was rugged, sea-carved rocks in fanciful forms giving way to a steeply sloping beach of sparkling black sand. While birds and bats were here in abundance – and no doubt slitherers, biters and rats that could swim – there seemed to be no other fauna. That he could see.

“Now island hop to the next island but one, to east,” Jess instructed. Briefly glimpsed on his first recce-flight, he had noted its barrenness, unusual in an area of rich green flora.

*

“A poetic sight,” Joel said as he brought the flier in low, seeking a suitable place to land the dodecagonal craft. “An island sea-girt and sea-washed.”

“Not entirely sea-washed,” Jess said. “See to west, that higher land probably escapes the highest waves.” Enough that a few scrappy trees grew there.

But there was no denying what Joel had said. The higher crests of the dark island rocks stood out above the water, yet every small and large crevasse between them foamed and glittered with squirming captured waves. And now they were closer Jess could see what else filled those fissures. A profusion of sea-fauna and flora in every colour the Monza eye could discern.

As soon as Joel had the flier safely landed, Jess was out on the rock and looking around him at the unexpected mass of life. He could hear the heavy slop of Kookka’s boots, and a lighter squelch of Joel’s.

“Careful of slipping,” he called back.

“I’ll wager the Techs don’t know about this,” Joel said.

“Food,” Kookka said, having found firm footing beside him. “All waiting for the harvester. But I’ll wager that’s not why you’ve brought us here.”

“Two things – three, now,” Jess said. “But I don’t know where to begin.” He turned, to include Joel in this. Too often, though never intentional, Jess and Kookka stood as a pair that excluded the others.

“You want to know more about what I said.” Joel seemed suddenly shy of his inflammatory claim.

“Not the first I’ve heard it,” Jess said. He glanced at Kookka.

Kookka nodded. “Yea, but tales are tales are tales. I’d take more notice of someone who’s been there. What say you, Jess? Has Joel been there? To Adamzal?”

Joel didn’t answer. He looked down.

“That’s what he told me when I attended him in the Sleep-Room,” Jess said.

Joel’s head jerked up. “I wasn’t lying.”

“No,” Jess calmed him. “I know some Monza do go there. I met a couple on Colabri. But I also know that those who visit have their memory wiped – at least, enough that they don’t remember beyond the going. But you say something happened during the jump to erase the wipe?”

“Possible?” Kookka asked. Jess nodded. “Only I don’t want some bud making a fool of me with his high tales. Next he’ll be saying he’s been to Pendolsphere and—”

Jess shot a discouraging look at Kookka. And if anyone had been to Pendolsphere… He had to tell Kookka his fears, that he mightn’t have seen an Itamakku. But how to say it? Instead, he returned his thoughts to Joel, and Adamzal.

“You’ve regained memories? You know why you were there – on Adamzal?”

“Liaison.” Joel sighed as if in relief at being able to talk. “I’m good with lingo. That was my job, to liaise with the Amzal on behalf of the Techs.”

“But what were the Techs doing on Adamzal?” Kookka asked him.

Joel looked first at Jess before answering him. “Harvesting Imms. Monza Imms.”

It was the last thing Jess had expected. The juxtaposition of those two words… coldness filled him. Monza Imms: Pinkies, the Techs called them. Himself, Joel, Kookka, his team, every Monza he ever had known: Monza Imms. But not his milk-mother; all milk-mothers were mature Monza, but infertile. The workers at the Kreegirn mine, too, where he and his sister…they’d been Monza Imms too.

He slipped that memory aside and ran a hand round his chin as if he’d suddenly noticed an itch. Not an itch but a softness, and not of bare skin. Soft as silk yet with a texture alien to the Monza. He felt his eyes tighten as he frowned. What the Pendoling…?

“There are Monza on Adamzal?” Kookka asked.

“Immature Amzal, really, but they’re no different to us. Except that they’re smaller.”

“I’m confused,” Kookka said.

“Guess you would be,” Jess said. “You were still a suckling when the virus struck. You wouldn’t have heard the ancient stories. With the death of the breeders – the radices, they called them, the fertile females – everyone shocked, tongues stilled, lips sealed for several cycles after. When the stories began again, it was the Techs’ own version. And that’s the only one that’s been told since. But I was out of the nurseries-proper by then, I was in the schools, and I can remember.”

“In the beginning Amzal and Monza were one,” Joel said, which drew a bewildered look from Kookka.

“I’ve not heard that since…I don’t know, not since I was in the nursery. Before the loss,” Jess said. “Where’d you hear it?”

“It’s what the Amzal say.”

“There was a disagreement between them,” Jess recounted the Techs’ version. “The Amzal said the Monza wanted too much territory.”

“Now that I have heard told,” Kookka jumped in. “And that’s what started the Amzal War.”

“You mean the one which ended with the virus sown?” Joel shook his head to say that wasn’t true.

“No, the Amzal withdrew,” Jess gave the old alternative version, the one his lips and thoughts had been sealed on for too long. “Not wanting involvement with Monza technology, they put distance between them.”

“It’s true,” Joel said. “The Amzal have no liking for Monza technology. Yet that’s not the true story either. There are always two sides. It was the Techs broke away. They’d found a way to replicate without need of the breeders, the radices. Though maybe they’d always been able. Anyway, they had no need of the old ways.”

Jess frowned. “What are you saying?” He’d not heard this part of the story. To replicate without need of fertile females. To replicate, not reproduce. “Clones?” That word hit him hard in the stomach. “Can’t tell one from another. They don’t even assign themselves names. Numbers. Tech 5050505. Clones. But if they can replicate…” He didn’t want to complete that thought.

“They’ve no need of the Monza,” Joel said it for him. “No need of we who remain immature, lacking the fertile females to effect the change.”

Again, Jess’s hand went to his chin. But feeling the strange silky texture, that hand fell away. For all his height and strength, his legs threatened to fail him. His head felt swimmy. He wanted to sit but didn’t trust to sit in the flier for the minimal chance of a Tech overhearing his thoughts. And neither would he risk sitting amongst the scuttling liminal fauna here.

“There are breeders – radices – on Adamzal,” Joel said. “The elder Amzal take the twin Imms to the breeders, one to mate, one to change to a milk-mother or worker. More Imms are born. The Amzal have an abundance of Imms. At first I thought it was their surplus they were giving to our Techs, but that’s not how it is. It’s a quota set by treaty. After the war – which according to the Amzal was initiated and pursued by the Techs until, unable to sustain more damage, the Amzal finally submitted – they agreed to pay an annual quota of Imms to the Techs. The Techs use them as labour in the Kreegirn mines, the fields, the factories, wherever. As slaves. Possibly those you’ve seen as Monza Imms were Amzals.

“That’s…” Jess hadn’t the words to express.

Kookka squatted low on the rocks, disregarding any indigenous fauna with nippers or stings. “I don’t want to believe this. Yet it fits. It even answers those Pendoling questions I’ve yet to ask. But by the highest sphere, I wish it didn’t.”

Jess had only the vaguest awareness of his body though maybe he nodded agreement. He had worked the mines, though as a metallurgist not as labour. He had seen the conditions. He’d questioned at the time how the workers could tolerate that. His sister had been with him there, as a data-collator. The organizational, managerial strata entirely comprised Monza Imms, although he hadn’t realised it at the time. While the actual workers he now realised had been Amzal slaves.

His thoughts raced on. “The Techs don’t need fertile females for their survival. Clones, self-replicating. And even if the need arose, they could as easily take a new breeding female from the Amzal.”

“I tell you, the Amzal are terrified of the Techs,” Joel said. “Whatever asked, they’d give.”

“But why this GM Programme?” Kookka scratched his head. “That’s what I don’t understand. All this psi-skying, to jump across who knows how many galaxies. All this cutting and tweaking of genes, when all that’s needed is to take a breeding female from the Amzal. This makes no Pendoling sense.”

“Do we serve them? Or do they serve us?” Jess wasn’t sure if he’d said that out loud. Perhaps it was only a self-held thought. How often he’d wondered it.

“We serve them,” Joel said. “As long as we don’t mature, we don’t stop growing. Giants they’re breeding in us. Strong armed workers to do their bidding – whatever that bidding might be. Oh, and in case you’re wondering the truth of that virus, let me assure you that not only do the Amzal lack the technology, but also they’re ignorant of the psi-sphere. They’re confined to Adamzal. Which once was the Monza’s own home planet. So how could they have sown a virus?”

Jess groaned. “They killed the breeders.” That still hadn’t sunk in. “Then set about altering alien species – as replacements? That makes no sense. Have I already said that? But it doesn’t. Why? Is it all a pretence? And even if, then still I ask why?”

“And without their technology, what are we?” Joel said.

“They’re farming us, that’s what I think,” Kookka said.

Jess squeezed his eyes tight. Ancient memories. Part-forgotten questions. And he still hadn’t said of his encounter, and the unfamiliar feelings that had engendered.

To be continued

Thank you for reading. As always, your comments much appreciated

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Sunday Picture Post: Gunton Woods

14th March 2025, the weather being fair, we hopped a bus and rode south of the county border, to the outskirts of Lowestoft. Destination, two woodlands, totally different. Photos from Gunton Woods this week, and from Corton Woods next week. So let’s go.

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This woodland contains a scatter of really old trees, of middle-aged trees and of youngsters

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It’s bounded by drainage ditches with conveniently placed footbridges over them

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Sometimes the sun can be against you, dazzling. But here it sweeps across a small glade of snowdrops, daffodils, primroses, catkins and cherry trees

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That sun was burning through these old oak leaves, almost setting them afire

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Cherry blossoms. Daffodils. Let’s celebrate spring

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Above: Drifts of snowdrops holding on, though some display signs of ‘aging’ Below: The abundant green leaves of hawthorn, looking fresh in the sun

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The trouble with these water-filled ditches is that as a tree ages, and gains in girth, the damp soil fails to hold it up straight – unlike (below) these younger firmer rooted trees

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Now it’s beyond this woods that we must go. But I’m leaving that till next week. Meanwhile, don’t forget to cheek out the flowers in this week’s Tuesday Treats

Hope you enjoyed

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The Bypass

Image credit: Shilin Wang on Pixabay

The bypass relieved the snarls of congestion at the town’s heart


11 words written for Sammi’s Weekend Writing Prompt: Heart

 

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