Glacial – the place you called home
Glacial – the love you claimed you bore me
Glacial – the heart you said was devoted to me
Glacial – the smile you seldom turned on me
Glacial – the looks that you gave me
Glacial – your hands when you touched me
Glacial – the knife I used to slice through the cords that bound me
Glacial – your body now laid in the morgue
Word count 66
Written for Sammi’s Weekend Writing Prompt
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crispina kemp 
This one sounds like a 666 not just a 66.. Edgy and brutal.. Love it.
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I thank you. I did have a particular person in mind when I wrote it.
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WOW!!! This is so powerful Crispina! Well done! 😀 ❤
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I thank you. I enjoyed writing it.
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The repetition of the prompt word was genius!
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Just a frustrated song write, me. 🙂
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Agree with HRRG – brilliant use of the repetition.
Excellently done!
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Does that mean I get a gold star? Please, please, please.
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Absolutely!!
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O Wow!
And now I’m feeling like Mutley out of Whackey Races. Gimme, gimme, gimme.
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Ha ha ha!!!
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Oh no, it’s the hooded cla-wa. Sorry, got carried away.
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Love the density of the repetition. And the last two lines are most definitely chilling!
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I thank you. I do sometimes turn that way.
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Nice One! 🙂
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Wowzie. I bet THAT felt good to write. Writers don’t have to be murderers – we get it all out in our prose. 🙂
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Yep, It’s good to express. 🙂
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Starting each line with the same word provides such impact. And how the atmosphere and tension builds towards that last line…great stuff! 🙂
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It wasn’t my first thought. My first thought was how cold this room, with the rain sapping my heat. It kinda took off from there.
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