Cold Hands, Cold Heart

Glacial – the place you called home
Glacial – the love you claimed you bore me
Glacial – the heart you said was devoted to me
Glacial – the smile you seldom turned on me
Glacial – the looks that you gave me
Glacial – your hands when you touched me
Glacial – the knife I used to slice through the cords that bound me
Glacial – your body now laid in the morgue

Word count 66

Written for Sammi’s Weekend Writing Prompt

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About crispina kemp

Spinner of Asaric and Mythic tales
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19 Responses to Cold Hands, Cold Heart

  1. Violet Lentz says:

    This one sounds like a 666 not just a 66.. Edgy and brutal.. Love it.

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  2. WOW!!! This is so powerful Crispina! Well done! 😀 ❤

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  3. The repetition of the prompt word was genius!

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  4. Dale says:

    Agree with HRRG – brilliant use of the repetition.
    Excellently done!

    Liked by 1 person

  5. Tien Skye says:

    Love the density of the repetition. And the last two lines are most definitely chilling!

    Liked by 1 person

  6. Wowzie. I bet THAT felt good to write. Writers don’t have to be murderers – we get it all out in our prose. 🙂

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  7. Starting each line with the same word provides such impact. And how the atmosphere and tension builds towards that last line…great stuff! 🙂

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