Crimson’s Creative Challenge #048

Every Wednesday I’ll post FOUR photos (if you want to get a head start you’ll find them marked in that week’s Sunday Picture Post and Tuesday Treats). Lots of choice!

And here they are – with apologies for the slightly different photo format:

You respond with something CREATIVE. Perhaps an  answering photo, or micro-fiction, or a poem, or just a caption

As before, there are only two criteria:

!!!!! Your creative offering is indeed yours !!!!!

!!!!! Your writing is kept to 150 words or less !!!!!

If you post a link in the comments section of this post I’ll be able to find it.

Here’s wishing you inspirational explosions. And FUN

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Tuesday Treats: Verge and Fenny Flowers

A selection of flowers featured on our walk from the archives (13th June 2022). Enjoy

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Scrolling this collection I noticed a distinct ‘white’ theme to these roadside flowers 🔼 white campion 🔽 stitchwort

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Almost keeping to the white theme is this honeysuckle 🔽

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In the dampened grasses of the sodden common, orchids 🔼🔽 and ⏬ always a delight to see, ragged robin

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Two fruiting bushes 🔼 the commonly-found wetland currant, this one red-berried and 🔽 the blackberry bramble, its pink flowers kissed by a hungry bee

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Continuing with the pink flowers 🔼 one of the many species of cranesbill, 🔽 foxglove and not quite so pink ⏬ woundwort

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That’s all folks. Don’t forget to check out Friday Fliers. There’s a treat waiting for you there

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Seed Fall Ch30

Chapter Thirty of my current wip. As before, all and any comments very much appreciated

Please note: This is a weekly post

Back at base Jess woke to horrific screams, frantic they were, full of denial. Not exactly the usual dawn calls from the forest. Louder. And Jess could only discern the one voice. Not a troop of noisy monkeys then. Besides, it wasn’t yet dawn. Jess grabbed his stun-gun.

He’d not been the only one called from their sleep. The base buzzed with chatter, stun-guns in every hand. But though Jess scanned the base he could see no intruder. Maybe hidden behind a hive?

Antel emerged from the hive he shared with Zeke, Brib and Miax. None of those held stunners.

“Put your weapons away.” Antel accompanied his shouted words with calming motions. “No invasion, not under attack.” He turned to Jess. “He’s conscious now if you want to speak with him.”

Jess turned back to his clutch. “You heard. All this commotion, that’s just Canipse regaining consciousness. Take that as a warning, anyone else thinking of pointing their stun-gun at their head. Bed. Sleep.”

The previous morning at the cave, after Antel had examined Canipse and declared him alive, the Banmakka hunters had melted away. Not foolish enough to risk a return through the forest until the sun was fully risen, Jess and his team stayed in the cave with Canipse. But even in daylight to negotiate that trail wasn’t easy. They numbered four – how they’d have managed with less, Jess didn’t want to think. As for that precipitous track up to the farm, Jess hoped never to repeat that experience. But at least they didn’t encounter predatory cats, nor disturbed disgruntled boars and snakes.

Kookka took one flier, Dorsin with him. Jess took the other with Antel and the miraculously still-unconscious Canipse. Arrived back at base the catering overseer still hadn’t recovered.

“Why?” Jess wanted to know. “When we take down an attacking animal it recovers faster than this, though it might be ten times the size of Canipse.”

“I don’t know for certain,” Antel said. “But I can guess. Those stun-guns always remain charged, yea? And usually in close proximity to the Techs? That suggests that, as with the psi-lights, they’re psi-powered. And I’d say that without the Techs, they draw their charge from us instead – at least from those who can fly.”

After those few words, Jess had left Kookka and the medic to settle Canipse into Antel’s bed. Jess had objected to Antel’s offer of his hive. But the overseer would need continuous observation until he’d recovered and where better than there.

Now with caution, Jess entered the medic’s bed-cell. Canipse’s throat must have been strained from his screams for now they’d subsided to croaks. He thrashed, eyes open, gaze lifeless. Conscious he might be but… Jess turned to Antel. “Where is he?”

“At a guess? The psi-sphere.”

Jess stared at Antel, for a moment agape. “The stunner sent him there?” He closed his eyes and tried to think, to logic it out. But though he’d the study and training of mineralogy and metallurgy, he hadn’t the years of studying life-forms that was Antel’s training and his ongoing interest.

“My guess is the stunner created a loop.”

“But he wouldn’t open to the psi-sphere.”

Forced a loop?” Antel amended.

Jess looked around him, as if he’d find answers scribed on Antel’s wall. “What do we do with him? He can’t remain in your bed. And we’ll have to find someone to…to feed him and do. That’ll have to be one of his operatives. Will he recover, do you think?”

“I’m not a Fire-keeper.” Antel scooped the bedcover from the floor where Canipse with his thrashes had thrown it. “Let’s just arrange his care – before he pisses the bed. My bed. He doesn’t smell too sweet as it is.”

Canipse’s home-hive was Number Five, shared with Guul and Azal, the textile and domestic overseers, and the ‘liaison operative’, Inchat. Liaison operative was an ancient and obscure designation whose origin was lost to the wideness of the universe. Within the GM Programme, liaison operatives served wherever needed in whatever capacity. Despite the evidence of Joel to the contrary, Jess thought of them as unskilled general workers.

“We’ll take Canipse to his own place, and swap Inchat with Dov,” Jess decided. Dov was a healer who served Antel when needed but otherwise worked alone. He’d be ideal. “As to a replacement overseer…?” Without pulling someone from the farms, there was really only Mavlin, from Hive Six.

“Enjoy playing Tech?”

Jess ignored Antel’s jibe. “Let me know the moment there’s any chance of getting any sense from him.”

*

Jess hadn’t been able to sleep after that disturbance. He spent the rest of the night and into morning writing reports. The report on Canipse, the Banmakka and the cave took the longest. He didn’t know when his reports would reach the eyes of a Tech, but he’d rather be prepared.

Reports written, Jess called Mavlin to his hive. Despite his initial doubts as to the wisdom of appointing Mavlin to catering overseer, during their chat Mavlin showed himself capable. He had farmwork experience, wasn’t averse to the digging and hoeing, and could cook.

“How long have you been with the GM Programme?”

“My fifteenth assignment.” He had a slight lisp, lacking two front teeth.

“Then it’s time you were promoted.”

“As at every assignment I’ve hoped.”

When Jess looked in query at him, he added, “Techs don’t like me.”

Again, Jess looked in query at him. “We were assigned as cooks, sister and me. A chemical processing place. We refused to cook what they gave us.”

“Which was?” Jess asked but Mavlin refused to answer. Jess left it. “Well, if you perform at your best and impress me, we could make this a permanent post.” He was reluctant to allow Canipse back into the privileged position. “At least until the Techs catch up with us.”

The workday done and still no news of Canipse, Jess hooked his favourite drum from the corner near his cell door and settled into the comfort of his hive’s soft seat.

His favourite drum – it was his largest. Tall rather than chunky. It had taken him three years to craft it, another year to treat the skin for its head and to set it tight. It had a good tone from curb to centre. Maybe it couldn’t transport him to the Animosphere like Kookka’s harp, but at times it took him into the psi-sphere and at the very least it helped unwrap the tight threads of tension that too often of late bound him at day’s end.

He was lost to the taps and the rhythms. The rain pattering the roof, the heavy sound of the four-footed hive-sized dlangi on the run. Cela-Byi’s light gasps as she laughed. He stopped drumming. Cela-Byi. He had left her in that cave, an outcast of her dow. He ought to return and ensure her safety. If anything happened…he was responsible.

“You didn’t have to stop just for me,” Kookka’s deep voice crept in from the door.

Jess covered the moment with a laugh. “Resting my hands. Too much drumming gives you calluses.” He waved his hands as evidence.

“First time I’ve heard that. More like you were somewhere and I called you back. But since you are back –” he held up a black distended bladder “– our precious Saker has been brewing, again.”

“In which case, best you come in. Take a seat. But haven’t you brought your harp?”

Kookka settled beside Jess, his legs still pressed against the monster-drum. “I thought we might talk.”

“Of things that can’t be said while Techs are near?”

Kookka passed the bladder to Jess. “Techs and others. I’m thinking this could be the place.”

Jess didn’t immediately answer but allowed the bladder to squirt a cold sweet liquid into his mouth. That first mouthful left a bitter aftertaste. But Jess had experienced Saker’s brews before and knew the second mouthful would chase that away.

He passed the bladder back to Kookka. “I agree it’s the best place any has ever looked. But the very thing that makes us say that is the very thing that makes me hesitate.”

“Because you’re the zem?”

“Without those Techs I’m now fully responsible for the clutch.”

“We could leave it till the final year. Schedules and routines in place, any problems arising sorted. Everything smooth as my chin.” Kookka caressed his jaw.

“And that’s the other thing.” Jess held his hand out for the brew-bladder. He hadn’t wanted to discuss this yet but now Kookka had broached the subject…“You say everything will be smooth running, but there’s been contact at Hives Seven and Eight. How long before the operatives there are driven to…” he couldn’t say it.

“Mate?” Kookka supplied the word.

“And die? Kookka, this clutch is on course to destruction. I took Joel, Zeke, Saker and Brib with me to sort that problem with Poalt. So, it was a Banmakka female, not from our breed-pool. But born of an Itamakku mother? Hear what I’m saying?”

Kookka took the brew-bladder out of Jess’s wildly gesticulating hands. “All the more reason to make this the place. Could be the only way we survive. You might think about that.”

But Jess didn’t want to think. He slammed his hands across the tall drum’s head and beat out an angry tattoo.

To continue next Monday

Hope you enjoyed

All comments welcomed

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Sunday Picture Post: A Walk to Wheatfen

This week the soaring temperatures have kept me housebound. So it’s just as well I’ve archives to call on. Here’s a walk from 13th June 2022. I know I’ve shared various photos from this walk before but – well, let’s let the photos speak for themselves. Hope you enjoy

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The bus drops us at Hellington, and we never can resist yet another exploration of this wonderful old church 🔼🔽 of all the photos I’ve taken here, this one I like best. It has a Renaissance feel to the view. And old porches like this are rare

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A little used lane leads us to the common 🔼🔽⏬ oddities to be viewed along the way

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The common, looking ahead 🔼 and 🔽 looking back once we’ve crossed a field ⏬ Why none taken in between? I clicked a few flowers and butterflies, but generally, with it so wet underfoot all focus was for staying dry and upright!

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Wheatfen is a wetland nature reserve, part of the Norfolk Broads 🔼 we sit on a thoughtfully provided bench to eat our lunch ⏬🔽 before making our way down to the River Yare – sails seen beyond the reeds

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Wetlands can be very wet, and in places dangerous. A boardwalk allows access to oft-flooded areas 🔽

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Then the walk has to be reversed to catch a bus home

If you missed my previous posts featuring Wheatfen and Hellington church, check them out here and here

Hope you’ve enjoyed

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Lake of Dreams

There was no avoiding it, she had to say it, for no matter how she turned it, Kerrid could suggest nothing other. She drew in a deep breath.

“That dream we share, that nightmare of falling through a storm, it’s a memory. A memory of our banishment. And we fell – were pushed – from the highest place, the place of divines.” She wanted to hide her head. Such audacity. And she hadn’t yet said it plain. “We are banished divines.”


79 words written for Sammi’s Weekend Writing Prompt: Audacity

No apology for my outright audacity in using Sammi’s Weekend Writing Prompt to sneak in a small promotion. I know she won’t mind.

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Friday Fliers

A selection of the butterflies we encountered on our walk 6th August 2025. Enjoy

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🔼 Speckled wood  🔽

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🔼 Green veined white 🔽 Holly blue

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🔼 Gatekeeper 🔽

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🔼 Common blue 🔽 ⏬

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🔼 Silver washed Fritillary 🔽

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🔽 Red admiral

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And that’s all for now folks

 

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CCC047: Howard’s Flat Tyre

I was scarcely out of the gate when Howard skidded his bike up beside me.

Heart aflutter. A thousand insects river-dancing in my cavities.

“You going mistletoeing?”

I held up the twine I’d use to pull the clusters closer so I could cut them. No stone yet attached, I’d find that later.

“Can I join you?” He tapped on the pole strapped to his crossbar. “Dad’s apple-picker. Could make it easier.”

He’d no need to tempt me. Howard had been my crush since middle school. And now he wanted to come mistletoeing with me? Oh wow.

But I discovered all was not as it seemed when, later, he proudly displayed his bunch of severed mistletoe.

“Now, thanks to you and your help, Melanie won’t be able to resist me at the Christmas dance.”

What? Melanie? Not me?

I left Howard to walk his bike home, because Howard’s bike now had a flat tyre.


I might have exceeded the word limit. I do apologise.

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Crimson’s Creative Challenge #047

Every Wednesday I’ll post FOUR photos (if you want to get a head start you’ll find them marked in that week’s Sunday Picture Post and Tuesday Treats). Lots of choice!

And here they are:

You respond with something CREATIVE. Perhaps an  answering photo, or micro-fiction, or a poem, or just a caption

As before, there are only two criteria:

!!!!! Your creative offering is indeed yours !!!!!

!!!!! Your writing is kept to 150 words or less !!!!!

If you post a link in the comments section of this post I’ll be able to find it.

Here’s wishing you inspirational explosions. And FUN

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Tuesday Treats: Ready For Fall

A medley of photos from our walk on 6th August 2025. Enjoy

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High summer, the best of the wild flowers now are putting out seeds, out hedgerows now are rich in nuts and fruits (not all are ripe)

🔼Chestnut and 🔽 mistletoe

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A sure sign of changing season, the red-berried spire of Lords-and-Ladies 🔽

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The flowers fade and fall, but in some species the remaining bracts are beautiful when lit by the sun 🔽

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🔼 Yes, spiders do have seasons. Looks like this one’s preparing. 🔽As to apples, what else says autumn quite so clearly

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Hedgerow fruits: 🔼 Sloes and 🔽⏬ two varieties of cherry-plums, aka Mirabellas

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🔼 Blackberries continue to ripen over a long season while their leaves provide the first of the autumn colours 🔽 below the berries are coupled with hop flowers (blackberry beer, anyone?)

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🔽 More blackberries, here coupled with white bryony. Do not touch. Or at least, do not eat.

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And to confirm the approach of autumn, we’re finding more fungi. Here I’ve only featured two but there are many more around

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Hope you enjoyed. Don’t forget Friday Fliers

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Seed Fall Ch29

Chapter Twenty-Nine of my current wip. As before, all and any comments very much appreciated

Please note: This is a weekly post

Canipse had ample time to construct a story. Yet when Dorsin landed the flier – too close to the hive in Canipse’s opinion – and Tarad arrived from the fields with his arms outstretched in greeting, Canipse still hadn’t a story. He wasn’t expected. He’d no need to visit. But he couldn’t be in the base-camp, not with that zem throwing his weight and wittering on about his fear of the psi-sphere and what he did with the stones. And where else was he to go?

But now what could he say? He said nothing. He didn’t as much as acknowledge Tarad but was straight out of that flier and away to the north, crossing fields recently harvested, to…where? Canipse didn’t know, he just needed to escape. Maybe he could hide out until the Techs returned. There were caves, he’d heard it said there were caves. One the observers spoke of a cave that swallowed a river to spew it into a hidden place within an unbroken circle of sheer rock walls. Such a cave might be a rich source of stones. He’d need plentiful stones when the Techs returned.

That’s what he’d do: Find that river, find that cave.

He ran, though his path fled downhill at a precipitous pace, and he was in danger of tumbling, ricking a knee or an ankle. But the path evened out, allowing Canipse the chance to catch breath, though he cast several cautious looks back. He’d begun the day by doing wrong, bullying Dorsin to take the flier without logging it, and now he’d tripled it. What could he say if they caught him? Not that he was scared of the zem. Some of those operatives who’d supported him, chanting, demanding a return of the Techs, they’d also been afraid of the zem. And was it a wonder when word was – and it wasn’t just an idle rumour, for a miner had witnessed it – that before he was a zem, Jess had attacked a Tech with intent to kill. And he denied killing those three Techs? Oh no, the sea took them. Who believed that? He’d been sent to Colabri for correction. The only Monza that Canipse had met who didn’t deny it. After all, why would a Tech-killer worry about what the Monza thought of him? But those operatives hadn’t run scared, not the way he’d just run.

Again, he turned to check no one followed. He couldn’t allow them to catch him. They’d drag him back to the farm and return him to the base and stand him in front of that Tech-defying disrespectful zem. But he gasped in disbelief of what his eyes saw. A giant.

He wanted to run. No, better to disappear into the earth. No one had said anything about giants in this land. A Monza giant, was it? Or a Tech giant?

It took several limb-numbing moments to realise the giant was neither Tech nor Monza. The Monza hadn’t mammary growths ten times the size of the farm-sows. Unless a milk-mother as his twin would have been.

His twin…

Despite he’d refused it, that Pendoling zem had opened him to the psi-sphere. Now here she was, naked and jabbering nonsensical words. He closed his eyes, yet still he saw her, the vision burned into his mind. And where were the Techs to protect him, to ease away the sight?

Her skin was peeling. Falling away. Pulled, tugged, cut, removed. Her raw body skinned like a butchered beast.

Though it brought his head closer to that gut-wrenching vision, he reached forward…and retched. Again, and again, until nothing remained.

Tears stung and blinded him, yet again he ran. Sobs snotted his nose. Thoughts disappeared, leaving him empty, a skinful of what to do, can’t do, must do. And why didn’t the ground suck him into its guts. Thoughts returned, slammed into him, turbulent like flood water thoughts. They tore away what courage he’d had.

Then…relief. Ahead was a cave. Whether it was the one the observers spoke of he didn’t know. Yet a river, all confused with tossing like his thoughts, led into it.

His feet twisted and slipped, losing balance on the water-slicked rocks. Determined, he scrambled, ankles ricking, knees bruising, and at last found a dry place inside the cave. With his arms latched around him, he rocked – as if that could comfort him. He wanted a Tech. A Tech would help him rebuild that wall, though then he’d never see his sister again.

The light in that cave diminished. Beyond it, the now familiar noises of late day in the forest returned. He breathed deep, hoping then to regain his composure. But that composure was gone. All that was left was a weeping jellified being.

With no thoughts to mark the passing of time, awareness faded. Until a hush of voices roused him. Clearer was the rattle of rocks and the knock of wood against stone.

Those voices grew louder. Not Monza. They spoke as that Pendoling giant had spoken. More giants? Come from Pendolsphere to taunt him before they skinned him and ate him.

A quick look behind him. No escape there. He scrabbled for his stun-gun strapped at his waist. He’d never needed to use it, didn’t know how many blasts it contained. But that was irrelevant. He couldn’t escape his death, but he didn’t have to be conscious for it.

He held the weapon to his temple, hand shaking, gun slipping. To steady it, he propped it atop his ear, closed his eyes and squeezed that trigger.

*

Jess took Kookka and Antel with him to Hive Eight at the caterers’ farm. By the time they came in to land the sun’s rays were staining the sky, west to east and north to south, a vibrant magenta. He hoped the light would hold long enough for them to find the useless dud.

Beneath him, he could see the flier Dorsin had taken and failed to log. That deserved a reprimand, but he could imagine the textile operative’s dilemma: Which would be worse, the deserved rebuke from Jess or the confidence-destroying rant from Canipse. Now, with the catering overseer missing, Dorsin was probably shitting himself. As he stepped from the flier, Jess acknowledged Dorsin with a nod but otherwise left him alone.

“Which way?” he asked Tarad.

Tarad glanced to the north where the soil in the recently cleared fields was already turning to dust. They needed rain to lay the soil. The Techs would have told Guul and Canipse, as textile and catering overseers, when to expect those rains but, supposing the Techs to be ever-present, how much notice had they or their operatives taken? And where was Canipse?

Kookka returned to the flier to grab the psi-lights. “You can use this?” he asked Tarad.

Tarad could but he held back.

“Take it, I want you with us,” Jess said.

Although Tarad expressed his reluctance, Jess was the zem, and he couldn’t refuse.

Jess looked to his companions and nodded in that same direction. Together these four strode across the fields, puffing up dust clouds in their wake, and followed a path down to the perimeter.

As they approached, a party of five males emerged from the forest beyond.

“Itamakku?” Antel said.

“Banmakka?” suggested Kookka.

“Or demons from Pendol?” Jess didn’t like the look of them. If it weren’t for the nether-horns which hinted at the Itamakku hill-dow hunters, he’d think them alien spirits. “Red skins. As if they’ve been skinned.”

“Look closer,” Antel said. “Beneath that red, they’re black.”

That didn’t help much.

“Obsidians?” Kookka’s tone clearly said jest.

It was difficult to be certain with the daylight failing but Jess reckoned while they were darker than the Itamakku, darker too than the Banmakka female he had released from Poalt’s little hut, they weren’t as dark as those he’d worked with when, as a newly assigned observer, he’d previously visited this planet. But why had they covered themselves in red paste?

“Red or black,” Antel said, “they’re pigmented enough to disappear into that forest. Especially this late in the day. Which makes them skilled hunters.”

“If they’re Banmakka, understanding them could be difficult.” Jess knew from having spoken to the female that they didn’t share a language with the Itamakku, though clearly they did communicate enough to mate.

Jess held up his hands, open palms to the red-painted hunters. His companions copied. “You speak?”

A male, naked but for a massive jutting nether-horn, stepped out to close the distance between the two groups. “Itamakku-speak, god-speak, we share?” He spat into his hand and held it out to Jess.

Was he supposed to do the same? Cela-Byi could have told him. Maybe even the Techs could have clued him in, if the preevos had observed this behaviour.

He took a chance. He spat into his palm and held it out to the hunter, who grasped it and squeezed till Jess feared his bones would dislocate and his hand distort. The hunter gave an emphatic nod of his head and released Jess’s hand. Jess nodded in return.

“Now Banmakka-man and god-man speak.”

So, they were Banmakka. That might explain what the spirit-woman had said when he visited Toki-dow. Except he couldn’t remember her words, only that the skinned god was a thing of the head-hunting Banmakka.

“God-man dead. In cave. Banmakka men guard body. No one eat. You take. Your god, you eat.”

“God-men thank Banmakka men.” He had wished several fates for Canipse, but not death. “How dead?”

The Banmakka male spread his hands. He didn’t know.

“Show us?” Jess said.

“Come.”

“Zem Jess, it’s nigh on night,” Tarad tried to pull him back.

“The Banmakka know this forest the way you know your fields. And we have psi-lights.” Although he gave the order not to use them while the Banmakka were acting as guides. “To use them might be seen as an insult to their knowledge and skills.”

Hope you enjoyed reading

Continues on Monday

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