Crimson’s Creative Challenge #4

red brick industrial cp

CCC4

Welcome to my weekly challenge—open to all—just for FUN, FUN, FUN

Here’s how it works:

Every Wednesday I post a photo (this week it’s that one above.)
You respond with something CREATIVE

Here are some suggestions:

  • An answering photo
  • A cartoon
  • A joke
  • A caption
  • An anecdote
  • A short story (flash fiction)
  • A poem
  • A newly minted proverb, adage or saying
  • An essay
  • A song—the lyrics or the performance

You have plenty of scope, and only two criteria:

  • Your creative offering is indeed yours
  • Your writing is kept to 150 words or less

If you link your post to this post I’ll be able to find it
If you include Crimson’s Creative Challenge as a heading, WP Search will find it (theory)
If you tag it #CCC others should be able to find it by ‘Searching’ in the WP Reader (fingers crossed)

Here’s wishing you inspirational explosions. And FUN.

Details of the photo are given, if relevant, below this line


Former railway administration buildings at Trowse in Norwich

 

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Asaric Tales e-book Update #13

Asaric Tales update 13

Asaric Axis (Asaric Tales Book Two)

O yay! O yay! I finally got those rewrites in Book Two done, including the nightmare that was those dreams. That book is now out with a beta-reader and I await her feedback.

Asaric Skies (Asaric Tales Book Three)

This has also gone out to beta-readers—and my many-many thanks to those who volunteered. Some of you have been exceedingly fast in reading, responding and returning. To date I have had one part- plus two full returns. And just from these I know I have more fixing to do. However, unlike the dreams in Book Two, I’m hoping this can be corrected with a few well-placed insertions and several lines of rewording. But I shan’t attempt that until all the betas have returned all their parts.

Asaric Sons (Asaric Tales Book Four)

It seems incredible that we’re just on the year round and already I’m able to report on Book Four. Book Four, no less! Wow.

So, while the beta readers are busy beta reading, and I await their comments with breath held and fingers crossed, I’ve turned my attention to this penultimate book.

First, I need to reacquaint myself with its plot and its incoming characters, to check out the details, make sure I’ve got the ‘science’ right, replace any vital scenes previously deleted in haste, and generally make sure it all hangs together. Of course, while I do that, it doesn’t hurt to replace the imperfect with the perfect (tenses, that is) and remove any extraneous words and purple proses (not that there are any, of course). All of which has kept me busy this past month. Moreover, since I’ve only just reached the two-thirds mark, it’ll keep me going for a while longer. Thereafter, the ‘proper’ rewrite.

Book Cover Design

I first encountered Lauren as a potential critique partner. And, wow! Our relationship has grown way beyond that, to mutual satisfaction (at least, I hope she agrees that). With both having a multiple-book series in progress, we’ve become each other’s sounding boards, with much passing of emails, personal anecdotes, recommendations, links and humour. You could could say we’ve become good pals. But more than that, Lauren has taken on the design of my book covers.

I was hesitant at first; I hadn’t seen any of her work, though I knew she had a strong design background having worked freelance in illustration and more recently onboard one of the UK’s largest greeting card companies (which she now has left to start a card design company with her husband) Anyway, I was sold from the very first sight of the first ‘rough’ … she had captured the feel and the essence of the story to perfection. But could she deliver the same for the others? With a 5-book series, it’s essential the covers connect in some obvious way.

To date I’m sitting happy on three book covers, and Lauren is working on the fourth. Though she hasn’t read the full series yet, she has read the synopsis, plus we’ve discussed it. And she has such a feel for the story. I swear, that day we first connected the gods of fantasy fiction were smiling upon us!

Lauren is currently building up a design portfolio and is open to a range of projects. Want to know more? Contact Lauren at Under One Cloud ( https://www.underonecloud.net ) where you’ll find samples of her work.

So am I going to flash a sneak preview? I hear you ask. Sorry, but I’m holding the covers close to my chest until all is prepared. Then I’ll do the full ‘tra-la-lah’ with a drum-roll thing.

In the meantime

I thank you, beta readers, past, present and future

And wish those who read and/or follow this blog the season’s best greetings

And I trust you’ll all have a glorious New Year

And finally, the next e-book update will be Sunday 6th January 2019

 

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Finish the Story Dec#1

The Chapel

light-3176887_1920Far beyond the city, in the middle of nowhere, sat a tiny chapel. No one knew who built it, why it was in the middle of nowhere, or why any traveler in need would always find the light on – but I know these things. I am alive because of Father Chris and the little chapel in the middle of nowhere.

I just turned eighteen and was so sure of myself. I knew everything I ever needed to know – at least I thought I did. I was an adult and didn’t need anyone’s permission to leave. So I did. I left home the morning of my birthday with a few clothes and what little money I had stuffed in a backpack. Mom and Dad weren’t up yet, which made it a little easier not having to listen to Dad ask why or listen to my Mom cry and ask me to stay. No, it was better the way I did it. At least it seemed that way at the time.

I boarded the Number 3 bus heading out of Jasper and …

(Morpethroad’s bit)

….. noticed the light on in the chapel. I was curious as it was a shade of green I had not seen before. In the vestibule was Father Chris. He was a tall man, taller when he stood up, and he was standing there looking at me as I passed.

I watched, as around him, the green light seemed to throb as if suspecting I was flying the coop of my hometown. He was dressed in his customary black, but his clerical collar radiated a blinding white light. I looked away with a sense of betrayal and guilt.

I looked back through the window of the bus and found myself just passing the chapel, green light and Father Chris. This disturbed me, as the bus appeared to be travelling at a rate of knots by now having cleared the town limits.

Three times this happened, and I started to feel stuck in some sort of ground hog day. I then pulled the stop cord above me and alighted.

As the bus moved away I saw across the road the chapel, now dark, lights gone and Father Chris standing in the doorway in his radiant collar.

I found myself crossing the road and coming up to Father Chris who …

(crimsonprose’s bit)

… opened his arms as if he’d embrace me, his face collapsing into a picture of welcome relief.

‘What is it?’ I asked, for surely something had happened to cause him distress. But more than that, I wanted to know what that green light I had seen.

‘Oh, my lad, my lad,’ he said. ‘I’m so glad you have come. I’m to have a visitation.’

‘A …? What, as in Jesus? Or a saint? Or …’ I slapped my hand over my mouth ‘… no, you don’t mean the devil? Is that what the green light?’

He flicked his fingers into my face. ‘Silly boy! That “green light”, as you called it, is just off Old Bess. But Old Bess is the problem.’

I’d best explain. Old Bess was Father Chris’s exceedingly antiquated computer—steam-powered I shouldn’t wonder, it’s so old).

‘So what’s up with her?’ I asked.

‘I think she’s not well. She refuses to access my records. And I have the bishop due any moment to inspect them. I don’t suppose …?’

The way he looked at me … what could I do but check out the ancient machine.

The fool of a Father Chris. He’d crammed a communion wafer into the thin slot of the floppy drive. I pulled it out and held it out accusingly. He coloured up.

‘But, my boy, my boy,’ I am so grateful. ‘And just in time, for, Hark! That’ll be the bishop now.’

And true enough, a vehicle of sorts was drawing up outside the chapel. But when I looked out of the door …

I pass the baton to the Dark Netizen at https://thedarknetizen.wordpress.com/

 Written for: https://thehauntedwordsmith.wordpress.com/2018/12/01/finish-the-story-dec-1/

Rules

Copy the story as it appears when you receive it (and the rules please)
Add somehow to the story in which ever style and length you choose
Be sure to pingback or comment on the original post please.
Please use the tag THWFTS.
Tag only 1 person to continue the story

Have fun!

 

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Stoned and Hammered

With so few titles left in our #2018picoftheweek challenge, finding photos to fit truly has become a challenge. But, at least for this week, I think I’ve snapped it.

Stoned and Hammered

Lo! A jeweller’s shop window: 13 November 2018

This jeweller’s shop window caught my eye as I was walking up (the famous) Elm Hill, in Norwich. In so many ways it qualifies for the #2018picoftheweek title: Glass

And if nothing lines up that’s cos they built wonky in those olden days.

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Tribute to the Man CCC3

wooden pew end man

Crimson’s Creative Challenge #3

I knew the man
I loved him dearly
When he died
I had him carved
And set beside me.

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Crimson’s Creative Challenge #3

wooden pew end man

CCC3

Welcome to my weekly challenge—open to all—just for FUN, FUN, FUN

Here’s how it works:

Every Wednesday I post a photo (this week it’s that one above.)
You respond with something CREATIVE

Here are some suggestions:

  • An answering photo
  • A cartoon
  • A joke
  • A caption
  • An anecdote
  • A short story (flash fiction)
  • A poem
  • A newly minted proverb, adage or saying
  • An essay
  • A song—the lyrics or the performance

You have plenty of scope, and only two criteria:

  • Your creative offering is indeed yours
  • Your writing is kept to 150 words or less

If you link your post to this post I’ll be able to find it
If you include Crimson’s Creative Challenge as a heading, WP Search will find it (theory)
If you tag it #CCC others should be able to find it by ‘Searching’ in the WP Reader (fingers crossed)

Here’s wishing you inspirational explosions. And FUN.

Details of the photo are given, if relevant, below this line


Carved pew-end in a Norfolk church

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Sunday Perfection

Parasol

Parasol mushroom, of sorts: 13 November 2018

Of all the photos I’ve taken of fungi this season, I rate this as the best. Shame I can’t identify it with absolute certainty. It’s a parasol, that’s all I will say.

Why is it ‘perfection’? Cos it’s not yet nibbled by bird, insert nor squirrel, and no tree has dropped debris upon it, and the rain hasn’t spoiled it. I’m guessing it’s newly risen that day.

 

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A Bridge Too Far

One of my favourite walks is along Marriott Way. A former railway, it sidles along sidings, ramps above the looping Wensum valley, and ducks beneath innumerable road-bridges. This  (apparently) is bridge number 262.

Bride over Marriots Way

Road bridge over Marriot Way between Attlebridge and Taverham; 21st October 2018

I believe Bridge No 262 qualifies for #2018picoftheweek title: Numbers

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The Proposal CCC2

Fye Bridge

Crimson’s Creative Challenge #2

‘We’ll go to Amsterdam.’

Yea? When?

‘For our honeymoon.’

Is that a proposal?

He nodded.

We’ll fly?

He shook his head.

By train, then; via the Chunnel?

He shook his head. ‘By boat.’

Yea? The ferry? From Harwich?

He shook his head again and grinned. ‘In my dingy.’

I looked at the flimsy boat, moored next to my father’s.

Nah. No way, mate.

What, to cross the North Sea in that?

 

 

 

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Crimson’s Creative Challenge #2

Fye Bridge

#CCC2

Welcome to my weekly challenge—open to all—just for FUN, FUN, FUN

Here’s how it works:

Every Wednesday I post a photo (this week it’s that one above.)
You respond with something CREATIVE

Here’s some suggestions:

  • An answering photo
  • A cartoon
  • A joke
  • A caption
  • An anecdote
  • A short story (flash fiction)
  • A poem
  • A newly minted proverb, adage or saying
  • An essay
  • A song—the lyrics or the performance

You have plenty of scope, and only two criteria:

  • Your creative offering is indeed yours
  • Your writing is kept to 150 words or less

To share your acts of inspired creativity simply tag it #CCC2
To view all contributions, search #CCC2 in the WP Reader

Here’s wishing you inspirational explosions. And FUN.

Details of the photo are given, if relevant, below this line


Looking along the river Wensum towards Fye Bridge. Here was the earliest Viking settlement in Norwich.

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