Crazy Old Lady

1st August 2020

It’s not easy when everyone knows
She’s a careless, carpe diem, madcap lady
Who says, yay, this is the way
Despite the map says it’s not
Then gets herself stuck
In a nettle-filled rut
Who leaps, then looks
And tumbles down hillsides
Grassy ones, thankfully never rocks
Who tries to beat the tide
Then drenched to the skin she laughs
Not easy when she’s proven her ability
Now approaching 75, to adopt sound sense and sensibility


76 words written for Sammi’s Weekend Writing Prompt: Sensibility

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CCC076: Gone Fishing

Gone fishing

To catch us a bass, trout or perch?

Gone fishing

To hook us a tasty dish?

Gone fishing

Or angling to dangle a sweet-baited hook?

Aye, to catch me a catch with a handsome look

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Crimson’s Creative Challenge #076

Every Wednesday I’ll post FOUR photos (if you want to get a head start you’ll find them marked in that week’s Sunday Picture Post and Tuesday Treats). Lots of choice!

And here they are:

You respond with something CREATIVE. Perhaps an  answering photo, or micro-fiction, or a poem, or just a caption

As before, there are only two criteria:

!!!!! Your creative offering is indeed yours !!!!!

!!!!! Your writing is kept to 150 words or less !!!!!

If you post a link in the comments section of this post I’ll be able to find it.

Here’s wishing you inspirational explosions. And FUN

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Tuesday Treats: Town Flowers and…Things

A gathering of photos from our town walk on 10th February 2026. Enjoy…

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Churchyards make excellent nature reserves, especially in towns 🔼 Snowdrops, dripping from the rain 🔽 Standing tall and proud, this solitary daffodil

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🔼 Perfect primrose glistening with raindrops 🔽 Winter aconite, all besplattered

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Along the river bank 🔼 now we see the daffs in all their collective glory 🔽 and crocuses trying to compete

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Where there’s a river… alder, its colour brought out by the white of the wall

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Where there’s a town there are shops. Where there are shops there are windows. Some with ghostly reflections of the street

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🔼 A wine merchant’s 🔽 I think this is an antiques shop; whatever, it’s an interesting display

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🔼 Antiques of a different cast 🔽And yet another…

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Two photos that don’t fit the above categories 🔼 Cacti for sale 🔽 Where there’s a river there are anglers

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That’s all for now, folks. Hope you enjoyed.

Next week, I promise you blue skies and sunshine… at least for part of the day

 

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Words On Writing Issue 8

Question: What sort of stories do you like to read?

I don’t mean which genre, but the storytelling’s general style. Genre is like saying you like evergreen trees. But the general storytelling style is like saying you like prickly trees with berries, or needled with cones, glossy leaved, or total dullards, and so on…

So, what sort of stories do you like to read?

You’re hesitant. I’ll go first. I like a story that contains a puzzle. I’ll say puzzle rather than mystery, since mystery can have mystical connotations. I like to solve the puzzle along with the protagonist. It makes my brain work.

Now it’s your turn. But let’s take it slowly.

Do you like your story to be fast paced?

You’ve gotta keep reading, page-turning, page-turning, until you reach the end. But then you might experience disappointment because you’ve finished that read. Gotta get another.

Needless to say (oops, cliché, sorry) that’s the type of story that agents, booksellers and publishers like. It’s the most common type on the bookshelves today.

What if you prefer a slower pace?

You want to immerse yourself in the story’s world. You want to identify with the protagonist, feel what they’re feeling, rejoice with them, cry with them, and generally make friends with them. That story takes much longer to read, and at it’s end while you feel satisfied you might feel…estranged. Ah, but look, here’s a sequel.

Such stories do tend to have sequels. Indeed, some might form part of a very long series. Sequels and long series also satisfy the agents, booksellers and publishers.

Maybe you don’t like reading stories that form a series. You could find them annoying. Unable to find the next in the series, you’re in a quandary: do you drop the series and move on, or skip that one?

What if the stories you most enjoy are those that stand out, one of a kind?

A story that in its premise, its protagonist or setting, is unique. Surely that is a treasure, maybe ear-marked to be a classic, given time.

You’re wondering why all my questions.

It’s because of recent watches of videos on YouTube.

I confess, I am obsessed with YouTubers who offer writing advice to we struggling authors. But I’m noticing that advice tends to cluster around just a few issues. Prime of which is “How to make your story a fast-paced page-turner.”

Cos that’s what publishers want.

Publishers do. But do readers?


That’s all for this week. Thank you for reading. And as ever, I’m happy to receive your comments

 

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Sunday Picture Post: A Small Suffolk Town

Casting our minds back to 10th February 2026, the morning starts with a drizzle but maybe it’ll clear and get out sunny. We opt to visit a town, where there are shops to dive into if the clouds release a downpour. We choose Bungay. There’s a medieval castle at Bungay but that’s wrapped in tarpaulin while it undergoes essential repairs. Not to be deterred, we hop those buses and duly arrive. Here 🔽 please join us

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The first thing you notice about this small town of Bungay is it has two medieval churches 🔼 the round towered Holy Trinity, just visible here 🔽 and the more ornate St Mary’s ⏬which once had a priory attached

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Next you might notice how colourful the houses! 🔽⏬⏬⏬

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🔽 !!!

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And the river 🔼 Here flows the Waveney, one of the three rivers that conjoin to make Breydon Water at Gt Yarmouth

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🔼 The placid river 🔽 The gush as that water rushes through the weir

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We cross that little footbridge back into town to find a cafe and warm ourselves, for this day is not warm.

I hope you enjoyed our town walk and that your nose, fingers and toes aren’t as cold as mine. And, oh look, it’s about to rain. More photos on Tuesday

 

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Lound Lakes

23rd February 2026

Here in UK we’ve had too many dull dismal grey days. But wonder of wonders, this day started off bright. For a while the sky even showed blue. Then as we approached Lound Lakes, the sun ran away leaving an arching all-over white… which reflected on the water gave us… light!

L is for Light… and Lound Lake, February’s choice for Maria’s Photo Challenge.

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Have You Met Cyril?

2nd September 2021

Have you met Cyril? Not someone you’re likely to forget.

The constant chatter and natter. The interruptions of every conversation, jumping in and finishing it. He even gets it right. Sometimes.

If it were just the noise I’d probably cope. In short bursts. But it’s the jiggle, the foot tapping and hands twisting, the knuckle cracking, and the scritching and scratching. Why can’t he be still?

My advice to you, if you ever have the misfortune of opening the door to him, is quickly to shut it again.

Failing that, once he’s in, there’s no other recourse but swift defenestration.


100 words written for Sammi’s Weekend Writing Prompt: Defenestration

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CCC075: Reflections

I stand
Looking
Staring
Not idly gazing
At the barbs beneath the surface
Set there by man?
By fishes?
Or are they kelpie or mermaid wishes?
To snag an eye
To mesmerise
An unwary passerby
To hook
To catch
To reel them in
To fall face flat into that water
To die
I pass on by
That’s not for me this day

 

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Crimson’s Creative Challenge #075

Every Wednesday I’ll post FOUR photos (if you want to get a head start you’ll find them marked in that week’s Sunday Picture Post and Tuesday Treats). Lots of choice!

And here they are:

You respond with something CREATIVE. Perhaps an  answering photo, or micro-fiction, or a poem, or just a caption

As before, there are only two criteria:

!!!!! Your creative offering is indeed yours !!!!!

!!!!! Your writing is kept to 150 words or less !!!!!

If you post a link in the comments section of this post I’ll be able to find it.

Here’s wishing you inspirational explosions. And FUN

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