No More Ranting

Posted on May 17, 2025 by crispina kemp

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Rosie climbing the hillsides
Puffing and panting
No more ranting
Not got the breath

14 words written for Sammi’s Weekend Writing Prompt: Breath

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13 Responses to No More Ranting

  1. Sadje's avatar Sadje says:
    May 17, 2025 at 9:01 am

    A moving piece

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  2. willowdot21's avatar willowdot21 says:
    May 17, 2025 at 10:53 am

    l know that feeling! She reminds me of an old hippy 💜💜.

    She is following the long and winding road. To places that look familiar one foot in front of the other. Memories cloud her vision and music fills her head…. Woodstock, Glastonbury never ending parties ….took there toll. She never made it to San Francisco , she never even left home but she still wears flowers in her hair. 💜💜

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  4. Dale's avatar Dale says:
    May 17, 2025 at 8:08 pm

    There are days…

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  5. Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings says:
    May 18, 2025 at 12:17 pm

    The older we get, the steeper hills become – well, that’s my excuse!

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