CCC108: Learning To Swim

The hottest day of the summer. And that water looked so inviting.

“Come on, Luce. You can’t not swim on a day like today.”

I could, cos I couldn’t swim. And that river was deeper than me.

“Jo, grab her feet.”

No!

“Terri, her arms. Throw her in.”

NO!

But my screams didn’t save me. Into the water, glug, glug, glug, arms thrashing, feet kicking. Somehow I managed to surface, gulp air and paddle the water.

Hey, I was afloat. And I was paddling back to the bank. But why did I want the bank? I was swimming, of sorts, and this water was cool.


Not quite how I learned to swim. No one helped me, I jumped in. But the consequences played out the same

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33 Responses to CCC108: Learning To Swim

  1. Aptivi's avatar Aptivi says:

    Swimming for the first time can be tough, but with determination, one becomes able to swim. Me too, I was like that.

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  2. poetisatinta's avatar poetisatinta says:

    That’s one way to learn 😆 I thought myself to swim when I was 10 on a summer holiday every day I was in the sea until I succeeded 🤣

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  3. My mother said I was swimming before I could walk! I’ll have to take her word for it. 😀

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  4. I love that moment when Luce surfaces, gulps air and suddenly wonders why she even wants the bank anymore. Being thrown in against her screams turning into the cool joy of swimming is such a vivid little truth about how we sometimes learn 🌹

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  5. Dale's avatar Dale says:

    If this were true, it would be horrible. To be thrown in involuntarily gives me the shudders to think of possible consequences (one would hope they would help if they saw to what extent you were struggling). However, if you really did learn by jumping in without knowing how, then kudos to you!

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  6. Sadje's avatar Sadje says:

    A very cool story. I also chose this photo

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  7. Chris Hall's avatar Chris Hall says:

    Swimming eh? (Not for me out there by the way)

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  8. Indira's avatar Indira says:

    A lovely story, Crispina. I, too, really wanted to learn how to swim, but I never got the chance.

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