Zikes! Affley dropped amid a flutter of leaves and landed hard with a jolt.
Yikes! She ducked and dodged the cascading water.
She danced. That water was scalding hot.
Swirled around, knocked and scraped against the tannin-stained walls, she’d had enough.
Ne-erh! Affley jumped out of mother’s teapot.
48 words, written for Sammi’s Weekend Writing Prompt

This is definitely the best teapot story so far. How clever!
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I thank you, J. I like playing with nursery rhymes and things.
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This was a cute one!
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Thanks. I’m on a humour run.
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Nothing wrong with that
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When I first started the blog I did quite a few *mis-worded* nursery rhymes.
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🙂
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This is so very sweet!
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Thank you. 🙂
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Lovely, mischievous, full of delight!
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I thank you, Andrea. I like to write fun, thrice in a while. 🙂
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