That’s Me On The Grass

8th July 2025

The morning sublime
The sky unlined
The trees of olive and lime
The birds on the branches aligned
The butterflies, damsels and dragons
Alive and flitting
In a fairy tale, fitting
And me on the grass, supine


37 words written for Sammi’s Weekend Writing Prompt: Supine

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18 Responses to That’s Me On The Grass

  1. SRIKANTH's avatar SRIKANTH says:

    A wonderfully tranquil scene is composed through clear, musical imagery. The poem moves from the vast “unlined” sky down to the specific, living details of birds, butterflies, and damsels, creating a perfect, “fitting” fairy-tale world. The final line, “And me on the grass, supine,” is the masterstroke—it places a passive, observing self within this idyll, completing the picture of absolute, harmonious contentment.

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  2. Sadje's avatar Sadje says:

    A beautiful poem, flowing so beautifully.

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  3. Sunil Kumar's avatar Sunil Kumar says:

    So sweet n nice 👍

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  4. poetisatinta's avatar poetisatinta says:

    That’s a lovely fun poem Crispina 🦋

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  5. Beautiful, Crispina! You’ve painted a magical scene!

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