CCC040: Asleep Beneath That Lake

When Bedivere dripped the juice between my lips
I’d not the strength to swallow
I called on Kay to ease its way
Now sleep must follow

Sleep arrives and my world takes flight
As across the lake, a weirdling sight
Of waters dividing
Of ladies silver-skinned rising

They rise and dive with exquisite grace
To scoop me into their watery embrace
Nine ladies each with a part of me
Each helping to set this worldly me free

They take me down
No fear that there I might drown
Deep into the waters of their mystical lake
There to sleep till a new call to awake


For those unfamiliar with the tales of King Arthur (if such folk exist) this was inspired by his long ago departure

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10 Responses to CCC040: Asleep Beneath That Lake

  1. Sadje's avatar Sadje says:

    A very lovely and magical tale.

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  2. Violet Lentz's avatar Violet Lentz says:

    And here I thought it was reminiscent of an Ophelia type character. Brilliantly woven!

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  3. Frank's avatar Frank says:

    Amazing Crispina! I love your poetry, you should do a book!

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    • Some is OK. A few are good. But most are mediocre, at best. But I thank you for your encouragement. Maybe I’ll scroll through the poems I have posted on wp over the past 10 years, see how many are printable

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