I Bet He Thinks Me Just A Child

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He lived next door to my best friend
That school holiday I hoped would never end
Many the reasons I found to visit
Hoping he’d be at home that day
But he worked, and worked away
Wheat-white hair and ice-blue eyes
Ice-hot shivers of limerence
Shivers that erased all good sense
Shivers that curled, coiled and throbbed
Had me panting
Wishing
Hoping
Please notice me, please
A word, a smile
He smiled!
That could last me days, carry me far, drive me wild
I bet he thought me just a child


91 words written for Sammi’s Weekend Writing Prompt: Limerence

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27 Responses to I Bet He Thinks Me Just A Child

  1. Sadje's avatar Sadje says:

    Aww, so sweet.

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  2. willowdot21's avatar willowdot21 says:

    Oh! Those first crushes 💜😞😞

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  3. Violet Lentz's avatar Violet Lentz says:

    Oh I would do anything to feel that again. brilliantly told, Crispina!

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  4. Dale's avatar Dale says:

    I’m with Violet! Mind you, I’ve never quite been that obsessive but still… that first crush is so big.

    Nicely done.

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  5. That’s what is so great about memory. We can hold that perfect face, that perfect moment, the sublime, and carry it with us, unblemished, forever!

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  6. There are few things that come close the the rush of that first crush!

    Gorgeous write!

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  7. Brian Bixby's avatar Brian Bixby says:

    So, a word I didn’t know. Thank you!

    Liked by 1 person

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