Down upon the woodland floor
Amongst the toadstools thin and tall
In wistful whispers for you, I call
Seeking your invisible door
Lost, my mind, in your enthral.
I crawl and slither, worm and squirm
Tear my hands on bloody thorns
Scrape my knees on fallen horns.
Why did you leave me? I’m infirm.
Written for Sammi’s Weekend Writing Prompt
Chasin’ the dream.. love this one!
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I thank you, Voilet. Well, I had all these fungal photos and … you know …
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Fabulous!
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Gee, Dale, I thank you. Took me a while to decide where to put that single line.
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Ya done good. More than good!
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Big smiles. 🙂
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With good reason
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🙂
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Amazing. I like this so much. This has pain,love and beauty all sewed in the words☺️
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Yea. Thank you. 🙂
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Beautifully written Crispina. 💐🙂
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I thank you. 🙂
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You’re welcome 🙂 💜
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Gorgeous little poem! Love it!
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I thank you. It flowed from the pen (or I should say, from my fingers on the keys) following its own direction.
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Absolutely brilliant!
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Brilliant I’ll accept. But absolutely? No, I’m too modest for that. But honestly, I appreciate and am humbled by the comments I receive here, by you and by others. I’m too old to be a *like-bug*, but it does swell my heart. I thank you.
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Absolutely Brilliant!
-Posting a second time because my WordPress app seems to be acting again and comments are not getting posted and this poem is too beautiful to escape notice. 🙂
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I received your first comment. My reply remains the same to this. I lower my head in modesty and thank you.
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My comment were not appearing on my own site so I thought that that must be the case when I replied to you too. 🙂
And yes, this particular piece is definitely, absolutely beautiful. I think this one is my favorite of the ones I have read from you thus far and one of the best ones I have read in quite some time now. But if words of praise make you feel uncomfortable, than I shall stop. 🙂
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It was written tongue-in0cheek. I do not write for praise. But I’m enough the human to enjoy it when it comes my way.
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As you should. 🙂
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🙂
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Lovely combination of a gorgeous photo and wonderful words 🙂 I imagine those first few lines could equally refer to the search for the fungi as well as a hidden fairy door.
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And what happens when, oops, imbibing … though, no, they’re not Liberty Caps, aka Magic Mushrooms.
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Ha ha 🙂
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Great Post! 🖤
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I thank you, YouLittleCharmer
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No problem! I loved this one! 👍🖤
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