If Only…

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Alone at night I want to write
To pen the perfect prose
To express my deepest hidden feelings
Even if it’s only to recite them to the bedroom ceiling
I want to speak of that one
Yes, that one
The one who woke me
The one with whom I had so much fun
Despite…maybe…because of the rules in force when that begun
Rules that forbade our meeting
Rules that in retrospect seem so fleeting
The one with whom I’m forever entangled
But how to find that perfect angle
How to channel that magister, Tolkien
And become a fellow Inkling


99 words written for Sammi’s Weekend Writing Prompt: Inkling

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About crispina kemp

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26 Responses to If Only…

  1. Reena Saxena's avatar Reena Saxena says:

    Rules are meant to be broken.

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  2. Sadje/ Sadie's avatar Sadje/ Sadie says:

    Beautiful writing

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  3. poetisatinta's avatar poetisatinta says:

    Brilliant – you had me going there- then shifting romantic entanglement to a desire for literary entanglement with Tolkien and the Inklings was stroke of genius- I had forgotten about the Inklings it would have been great fun I think hanging out with Tolkien and CS Lewis 👏😀

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  4. Nicely done, Crispina. Great (and unexpected) use of the prompt word. 🙂

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  5. Violet Lentz's avatar Violet Lentz says:

    Whew! This is so intense! I love this! I was convinced it was you longing for a lover until the very end.. brilliant!

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  6. Dale's avatar Dale says:

    Brilliant and original use of the term, Crispina. Wonderful writing. I read it twice and then a third time. It got better and better.

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  7. You definitely pulled it together. There’s a lot to like here, including the lead up and the twist. Brava!

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  8. willowdot21's avatar willowdot21 says:

    A brilliant piece of writing and a great tip of the brim of your hat to Tolkien. 💜💜💜

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  9. Renata Hartsong's avatar Renata Hartsong says:

    WOW WOW WOW!!!

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