I resent the day that I met her
That demon who wrapped me and weighted me with a fetter
And, oh my god, how willingly I let her
When she said try this on
It’ll make you feel better
She made me into an eager abetter
Now I can’t ever forget her
And that day when I said ‘Let me go’ and how that upset her
It’s all contained in this letter
72 words written for Sammi’s Weekend Writing Prompt: Letter

Nicely done Crispina
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Thank you, Sadje. It wrote itself, really.
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Awesome. 👏🏼
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🙏🥰
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Oh wowza!
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I love your enthusiasm. Thank you
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That’s me–thrilled or devastated, no middle ground. You’re most welcome.
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I like that. Tepid people are so mediocre
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Hahaha, I like that…I guess I’m not mediocre. God bless you.
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Like minds…
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😊
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Some people are just like that….
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Eager victims, and eager entrappers. Yea, I’ve known a few
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Ah yes, I knew someone like that. I’d love to read that letter.
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Would make a good basis for a thriller, maybe
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Love the take here…and I want to see what it says !!
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If my genre were thriller, or even romance, I might use that as an intro to a story
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Definitely 👍
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Great take, Crispina. How do you guys write so quickly? It takes me a long time to think.
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I think I must have trained my brain to do it. When my children were young I’d make up rhymes to keep them amused. It’s stuck.
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