Donald and Dafney out walking one day
Happened to wander onto Breydon Way
Donald nudged his beloved Dafney
Look, there’s two of those walkers coming our way
If we hide perhaps they’ll pass us by
But they’re scary creatures, said Dafney
I’d prefer that we fly away
crispina kemp 
A cute story. I also chose this photo.
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I thought they show such character!
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Yes they do. Handsome couple
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And they walked quite determinedly towards us, flying off at the last moment. These were wild ducks, not tame townies
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They are very cool ducks š¦
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Excellent telling. I felt there was a conversation going on when I saw this one!
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I told it exactly as it seemed to me
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Did they see you and your walking partner? Ha ha Very cute Crispina!
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Oh yes, they were quite close before they upped and left us alone on the path. Wild ducks aren’t usually that brazen
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Beautiful poem, Crispina. I chose the same, but I am not satisfied with the last two lines I wrote. I don’t know whether to publish. If I change, rhyming goes wrong.
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Sometimes when a final line doesn’t rhyme, it adds punch to the poem
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Wonderful poem to tell the story of the ducks.
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I rather liked the idea of changing perspective
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