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Don’t get me wrong
But really I don’t like Rom-Com
Too often the plot is contrived
And isn’t strong
With characters poorly constructed
Who don’t seem to belong
The dissonance
And disconnect
Strikes me painfully
Like an overloud gong
An altogether ill-written maelstrom.
But not every Rom-Com fits like this
A few are truly watch-worthy bliss!
56 words written for Sammi’s Weekend Writing Prompt: Maelstrom
crispina kemp 
Well said and spot on.
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Thank you, Sadje 🙂
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Very welcome
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Another good one! Well done!
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Thank you, Frank. I enjoy these challenges!
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Oh, I agree. Most of them seem just thrown together! I love the old ones where the dialogue is witty and fun. Great 56, Crispina!
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Thank you, Dorahak. There is a formula that is all-too easily followed. I agree, the old ones are the best
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