Kerrid watched the sky, a sullen stare at the encircling Star Serpent, a fervent prayer to the Spinner for some sign, any sign, some guidance. That sign came the third night.
She thought she’d entranced to the Web, yet there was no cold cutting wind, no taste of smoke and salt on the air in the Web.
But if she weren’t in the Web, then what were those lights, these wind-wafted veils of delicate hues?
Divines… pouring through the star-guarded hole. She’d found the pole that threads the world. The Omphalos.
91 words for Sammi’s Weekend Writing Prompt: Omphalos
Sampled from The Pole That Threads, Bk 3 in The Spinner’s Game
She found something better than the web! I liked this phrase, “wind-wafted veils of delicate hues”
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Thank you. I tend to get a bit lyrical
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Nicely done, Crispina.
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Thank you. Always trying to take short-cuts, but sometimes they take longer!
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Wonderful that you were able to extract a part of your book for this prompt! Fabulous!
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I itell myself it’s a short-cut, but really it’s not. Usually entails more work!
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Haha! Good for your legs, lungs, et al…
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Yea, indeed! ❤️
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