CCC119: I Remember

Crimson’s Creative Challenge 119

I remember when you left us
Cold and lonely on this shore
No light nor gold within our life
Gone from us forever more.

And here and now you do return
Head hung low, remorsefully
Barely strength to greet the day
Expecting us to welcome thee.

And I say, welcome to thee
The New Year’s Sun


This photo was taken New Year’s Day as it finally emerged from the mist

About crispina kemp

Spinner of Asaric and Mythic tales
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13 Responses to CCC119: I Remember

  1. Is that the remains of a pier?

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  2. Dale says:

    Beautiful.
    And any appearance of the sun, no matter how faint, does bring some joy, doesn’t it?

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  3. I like the photo. The poem was an emotional roller coaster that ended with a smile. Well done!

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  4. Kim Smyth says:

    That was very beautiful and touching! Good job!

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  5. Sadje says:

    Unexpected ending

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