Which Lights?

image by Crispina (21st Oct 2018)

Twilight… Two lights.

Which lights?

This light? That light?

Sunlight, moonlight, starlight, lamplight?
Limelight, footlight?
Nah, headlight, backlight.
Paradise by the Dashboard Light.
Ghost lights, spectral lights… witch lights?
Christmas lights, fairy lights?
Candlelight, firelight?
Gaslight, flashlight?
Ship’s lights?

Which lights? These lights.

44 words, Twilight: written for Sammi’s Weekend Writing Prompt

About crispina kemp

Spinner of Asaric and Mythic tales
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28 Responses to Which Lights?

  1. Dale says:

    As long as we can see…
    This was fun.

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  2. Violet Lentz says:

    Perfection. And I love the photo.

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  3. EntangledDesigns says:

    Nice! 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

  4. Jen Goldie says:

    This is full of imagery. I can see how you grouped them I read it slowly. “Paradise by the Dashboard light” was intriguing and it full stopped me there. Then it seemed to flow into memories and settled with “These lights” . Almost like a journey through lights. Quite the journey in 44 words, a lifetime.
    Maybe I’m reading too much into it. But I think it’s genius 💜🌼
    I’d Title it “A Lifetime”

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  5. This is a great poem and your photo is so lovely and soft. It would be wonderful for one if your CCC’s! 😀 ❤

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  6. Brian Bixby says:

    “I see the shooting stars falling through your trembling hand.”

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  7. Indira says:

    Wow! Just take us to light from darkness.

    Liked by 1 person

  8. Indira says:

    Very interesting. Some are so full of ideas. Thanks for sharing.

    Liked by 1 person

  9. mesabele says:

    Luces que se prolongan hasta el infinito.

    Liked by 1 person

  10. Lovely word play – and so many words for light. I’m particularly pleased by the inclusion of Paradise By – great song!

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