Heavy as Tombstones

sepulchre, Burlingham

Heavy as tombstones
Curdles the hero’s heart and courage
Shrouds his love, his life

Written for Sammi’s Weekend Prompt

About crispina kemp

Spinner of Asaric and Mythic tales
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65 Responses to Heavy as Tombstones

  1. Violet Lentz says:

    This saddens me.. Makes me feel like he gave his life for nothing..

    Liked by 1 person

  2. Violet Lentz says:

    and you definitely hit your mark!


  3. EntangledDesigns says:

    Poignant and written wonderfully! πŸ’•

    Liked by 1 person

  4. Dale says:

    Ooohhh… dark and heavy. Brilliantly done.

    For Violet πŸ˜‰

    Light as feathers
    Soothes the hero’s heart and courage
    Envelopes his love, his life

    Liked by 4 people

  5. Ennle Madresan says:

    Oh gosh, this is 5-Star, the best I’ve read yet. You filled the 15 words full, deep and rich.

    Liked by 1 person

  6. So well written! πŸ˜€

    Liked by 1 person

  7. You spent those 15 words very well, Crispina. Loved it πŸ™‚

    Liked by 1 person

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