Crimson’s Creative Challenge #20
My grandma lived over the track
One up, one down, in a house painted black
A stile over the fence to the well out back
Oxlip meadow, goats and a wood stack
If I crossed the lines I’d get a smack
Cos my grandma, you see, lived over the track
Written for Crimson’s Creative Challenge
True story:
My grandparents lived beside the Norwich to London line, and the only way to it was across the track. My mother was terrified I’d wander across on my own; never paying attention, in a world of my own.
This was so entertaining, and finding out its a part of your truth made it ever so much more enjoyable.. Loved this little window into your world.
LikeLiked by 1 person
I thank you. I’m still terrified to cross the train lines. 🙂
LikeLiked by 2 people
Love what you did with the prompt. Did you have it in mind when you posted the photo for your challenge? Just curious 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
I thank you. I never think of my own take on the prompt until after I’ve chosen and posted the photo. Though I do chose photos that, to me, seem able to inspire multiple takes. I’ve already chosen next week’s photo. But I’m dilly-dallying between theming something on frogs, or on water sprites. And now you’re wondering what the photo. 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
Love this. Am now contemplating my submission…
LikeLiked by 1 person
I thank you, Dale. 🙂
Look forward to reading you. Or looking at it if it’s a photo, cartoon, or similar. 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
Dunno. Yet! 😉
LikeLiked by 1 person
Well, no time limit, no pressure. Fun is the things, and inspiration, and inpirations calls when least expected. 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
I know it. But it’s gonna be today… 😁
LikeLiked by 1 person
Okky-doke. And allowing time zones, I’ll see it in the morning:)
LikeLiked by 1 person
True…
LikeLiked by 1 person
🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
Love the flow of your poem. 😁
LikeLiked by 1 person
I thank you. A case of inspiration freely flowing
LikeLike
My grandmother lived on an Avenue with Street Car Tracks and NEVER did we try to cross over. Thanks for bringing back warm loving memories 🌼
LikeLiked by 1 person
Just gets drummed into you, doesn’t it. Impossible to override.
Happy to have triggered old memories
LikeLiked by 1 person
Yes thank you. Those were halcyon days for me with her 🌹
LikeLiked by 1 person
I love this Crispina, not only is it amusing, but it gives a real sense of nostalgia and atmosphere of a different time.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Hey, you’re making me feel ancient. But it’s true, I did spend much time in my childhood in one of the forgotten pockets of Old Norfolk. Memories that can never be forgotten.
And happy you liked.
LikeLike
Haha! Not so ancient, but childhood always seems a different world!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Mine was magical. At least, magical when away from the ogre. Guess you can’t have magical without wicked trolls and ogres.
LikeLiked by 1 person
I see what you mean! Train tracks can be frightening, indeed!
LikeLiked by 1 person
And drummed into me as a child, I’m still not keen on crossing the lines. 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
Love both the poem and the story behind it 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
Last week, walking under a railway bridge, the big never-ending London train came. And my daugter laugter (kindly) I’d my head pulled in like a tortoise. Still the child when trains come fast on me.
LikeLiked by 1 person