Surya’s Golden Castle


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Surya stood back to admire his work. ‘Imagine it gilded, roof and wall.’ A residence suited to Yama and Yami.

He cast a glance at the other sand castles. Nah, none equalled his.

Written for What Pegman Saw. Mumbai, India.


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16 Responses to Surya’s Golden Castle

  1. Violet Lentz says:

    Isn’t that amazing! how on earth does someone envision such a thing let alone create it? Great take on the prompt as well..

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  2. Dale says:

    Short and very sweet!
    Well done, ma’am!

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  3. An exquisite sand-castle definitely appropriate for a god – good take on the prompt.

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  4. Joy Pixley says:

    Wow, what an amazing find, that sand castle! I can’t even imagine how long it took to make that, and how careful the maker would have to be.

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  5. Wonderfully enticing mini-flash fiction!

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