Back In The Distant Day

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Shunamn tapped his fingers
Each one turned down as he counted
It was the Alsime way
Detah snorted
The granary’s way was quicker
Easier

Huh, an abacus would have been even easier and quicker
But Detah lived in the Western Bronze Age
No contact with the Far Eastern Cultures
Yet


50 words for Sammi’s Weekend Writing Prompt: Abacus

Inspired by and based upon my wip, Saramequai

 

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7 Responses to Back In The Distant Day

  1. willowdot21's avatar willowdot21 says:

    This is excellent 👌💜

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  2. poetisatinta's avatar poetisatinta says:

    What a great take – from counting grain to the inevitable march of time and technology🙌

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