CCC065: God of the Bounds

Long-long long-long-long ago in a faraway land there dwelt a god. A devious, scheming, thieving god. So troublesome this god, the people of that place wouldn’t allow him into their town.

“You’re to keep your troublesome ways away from us. Torment and trouble strangers, instead.”

The god snorted dissatisfaction. “You could at least give me somewhere to live, here on the bounds of your town. You have nice houses, but what do I have?”

The townsfolk agreed and hammered in thick chunky posts all around their bounds.

And there the god dwelt.

This arrangement worked so well that the god soon earned wide renown. Other towns erected posts for him, posts of stone, and they gave the god a name. Hermes.


This isn’t total fantasy. It’s my interpretation of the earliest stories of the Greek god Hermes

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12 Responses to CCC065: God of the Bounds

  1. Violet Lentz's avatar Violet Lentz says:

    Brilliant adaptation! I love this!

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    • Thank you, Violet. Maybe being born under Hermes’ influence (Mercury, Gemini’s ruler) had inclined me to discover more about him. God of the Gates. God of the Bounds. God of the Post (called a hermes, I believe it had a phallic origin)

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  2. willowdot21's avatar willowdot21 says:

    I love your interpretation it’s very neat. I also love the photo of that face on the post in the photo. 💜💜💜

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  3. Hermes the messenger 👌

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  4. Very nice take about the fate of gods or rather the notion of them.

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  5. Excellent story, Crispina. I chose the same image to write about; kind of difficult to ignore a face like that!

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