Adrift with a float
There was a boat
The boat was red
To me it sped
Held in my sight
Despite the light
The boat passed by
Left me to die.
But I’m alive
Was it a joke?
Or maybe a dream
That’s how it seems
I hope I woke.
Adrift with a float
There was a boat
The boat was red
To me it sped
Held in my sight
Despite the light
The boat passed by
Left me to die.
But I’m alive
Was it a joke?
Or maybe a dream
That’s how it seems
I hope I woke.
A fun poem Crispina.
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Thank you, Sadje. I rearranged the order of those lines several times. Still not sure I got the best order. 🙂
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I like them.
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🙂
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So entertaining! Love this poem, Crisp❤️
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Thank you, Nan. 🙂
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Lol, lol, I love your humorous poetry!
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Thank you, Frank. It’s the sort of poetry I enjoy writing best!
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One would hope this is but a dream!
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She’s still alive, it must have been a dream! 🙂
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Exaclty 🙂
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🙂 🙂 🙂
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