CCC101: The Turn Around

Crimson’s Creative Challenge 101

What is this place he’s shown me?
A folly.
Shown to me, why?
For my folly in loving him?

I turn away that he won’t see the hurt in me
With gentle hands, he turns me around

You have it wrong
Here’s my secret place I share with you
For the love of true friends
Is a love that never ends


It is indeed a folly and despite its appearance, it is quite modern.

About crispina kemp

Spinner of Asaric and Mythic tales
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10 Responses to CCC101: The Turn Around

  1. Sadje says:

    Friendship or love? Ever a dilemma.

    Liked by 1 person

  2. A sweet sadness in this, too.

    Liked by 1 person

  3. A touching piece to go with an interesting feature Crispina.

    Liked by 1 person

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