CCC19: The Hill is Steep

High Noon

Crimson’s Creative Challenge CCC#19

The way is steep, the day is hot
A foot-weary slog to reach the top
I check my watch, what do I see?
Oh. it’s 12 o’clock!


Written for Crimson’s Creative Challenge #19

About crispina kemp

Spinner of Asaric and Mythic tales
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33 Responses to CCC19: The Hill is Steep

  1. Violet Lentz says:

    Happy high Noon! Delightful!

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  2. I like this ๐Ÿ™‚

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  3. Ramyani Bhattacharya says:

    Short and sweet๐Ÿ˜

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  4. With you every step of the way

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  5. I really like this–I could feel the heat and the stretch of the climb ๐Ÿ™‚

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  6. Dale says:

    … and time for something cold to drink?

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  7. You’ve captured the exertion in just a few words with a funny twist and what a great street name!

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  8. Again, you’ve nailed it with the shorter form of writing. Not a word wasted; it conjures a very distinct picture and I felt I was there, walking up the steep hill too ๐Ÿ™‚

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