The Asylum CCC4

red brick industrial cp

Crimson’s Creative Challenge #4

They hunt us, the Hunters
Why, what have you done?
Told some lies, sold some fun
They catch us, the catchers
Strip us and thrash us
Inside the ‘sylum. Done.

For Crimson’s Creative Challenge #4

About crispina kemp

Spinner of Asaric and Mythic tales
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24 Responses to The Asylum CCC4

  1. I like the word play here. It creates a good rhythm and adds a creepiness to the poem that evokes the atmosphere of an asylum. I can imagine some poor unfortunate chanting this…

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  2. Dale says:

    What Sammi said!
    Great rhythm and I really enjoyed your poem.

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  3. aFrankAngle says:

    Oh what goes on behind those haunting walls.

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  4. Lynn Love says:

    It does have a grand rhythm to it, this little snippet, and a clear voice too, which I love. That choppiness of phrase works well for the subject. I may be too late to join in (I’m always too busy at work Wednesday through to Friday to write on those days) but, Hell, I’m gonna do it anyway. Just love that photograph – where is it?

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  5. Violet Lentz says:

    Seems almost menacing when I look at it through these words.. Thanks for the prompt and the view!!

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  6. Resa says:

    Wow! Very interesting.

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