CCC 79: Poem exceedingly silly


Helter-skelter in a swelter
Ice-cream sundaes and chilled drinks
Come on down, Dad’ll catch you
Just let go and, oops… he blinked.

Helter-skelter, sun’s a melter
Breezes cooler at the top
Come on down, Mummy’s waiting
Just let go and, ouch… you didn’t stop.

Helter-skelter, rain’s a pelter
It’ll soak you high up there
Come on down and share the brolly
Eat fish and chips upon the pier.





About crispina kemp

Spinner of Asaric and Mythic tales
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36 Responses to CCC 79: Poem exceedingly silly

  1. “Helter-skelter” is sure a fun phrase to rhyme with!

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  2. I really enjoyed that.

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  3. Sadje says:

    Cool! Nice poem.

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  4. EntangleDesigns says:

    Silly in the best way possible! 😄 Love it!

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  5. Dale says:

    That was a fun one, Crispina!

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  6. What a fun poem! Love it. ❤

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  7. Indira says:

    Wow! Enjoyed this. How words come so easily to you, dear.

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  8. A good take on the prompt: fun family day. 🙂


  9. Jen Goldie says:

    Excellent poem Crispina 🙂 You confirmed my take on it. Mine was just a guess.
    I knew the term “Helter Skelter” from a far less fun point of view.But that event came much later.
    I prefer the fun one 😊

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  10. Helter skelter in a summer swelter
    The birds flew off with a fallout shelter…

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