You are my Sun

Posted on March 22, 2021 by crispina kemp

Oct 2020

You are my sun
You keep my warm
You light my life
When day is done
You carry me down
To enfold me
In your netherworld of dreams
Yet, my love, you are so hot
I’ll burn if at a distance I am not
Thus for safety I’ll remain orbiting

50 words, written for Weekend Writing Prompt: Orbit

About crispina kemp

Spinner of Asaric and Mythic tales
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14 Responses to You are my Sun

  1. castorpblog says:
    March 22, 2021 at 12:20 pm

    Sizzling emotions 👏

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  2. Sadje says:
    March 22, 2021 at 12:23 pm

    A passionate poem. 😍

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  4. Dale says:
    March 22, 2021 at 2:45 pm

    Too hot to handle… Best stay at a distance!

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