You smashed into me with clouds and roses
Shattering my composure
Now the coloured fragments of my heart
Reforming
Becomes a kaleidoscope, enchanted
23 words written for Sammi’s Weekend Writing Prompt: Kaleidoscope
You smashed into me with clouds and roses
Shattering my composure
Now the coloured fragments of my heart
Reforming
Becomes a kaleidoscope, enchanted
23 words written for Sammi’s Weekend Writing Prompt: Kaleidoscope
Absolutely divine, Crispina.
I love this.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you, Dale. Decided against the addition of music. It would have ruined the simplicity
LikeLiked by 1 person
I agree!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Well received
LikeLiked by 1 person
And why would it not be?
LikeLiked by 1 person
Not my normal style…
LikeLiked by 1 person
No one would know, as you’ve done this more than well.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Yea, I am surprised, since it just poured from me.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Funny how that happens when we are so inspired…π
LikeLiked by 1 person
Indeed… π Strange the things that bring inspiration
LikeLiked by 1 person
Strange and exciting things…
LikeLiked by 1 person
I’m developing rosy cheeks…
LikeLiked by 1 person
They do look so lovely on your beautiful skin…
LikeLiked by 1 person
And now in semaphore… π
LikeLiked by 1 person
π
π
LikeLiked by 2 people
Love the emojis
LikeLiked by 2 people
They do make it fun, don’t they?
LikeLiked by 1 person
Oh yes. But some conversations can’t be done in emojis
LikeLiked by 1 person
Oh… but some so can π
LikeLiked by 1 person
I’m not that familiar with them. I’d signal wrong
LikeLiked by 1 person
He he he… Maybe…
LikeLiked by 1 person
The potential for misunderstanding in texting and DMs is already there, without adding more
LikeLiked by 1 person
No kidding!!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Sorry long delays. Someone’s playful
LikeLiked by 1 person
Oh…. delay away, then…
LikeLiked by 1 person
π
LikeLiked by 1 person
Love this!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you… π It sprang into my mind, ready formed.
LikeLiked by 1 person
It happens that way sometimes.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Inspiration called today. I was here and so it stayed π
LikeLike
Opportunity just knocked too, over at my site.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Congrats!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Gorgeous take on the prompt, Crispina.
Shalom,
Rochelle
LikeLike
Thank you, Rochelle π
LikeLike
Yum. This poem is absolutely delicious. I’m reading it over and over, because in and of itself, it is a kaleidoscope of meaning. xo
LikeLiked by 1 person
I confess, this is one of the few I’ve written that I’m really pleased with
LikeLiked by 1 person
We parents (of poetry and prose) do have our favorite children (poem and stories). π
LikeLiked by 1 person
This is so….
LikeLiked by 1 person
What a beautiful poem! It really brought the word challenge to life! Well done Crispina! π β€
LikeLiked by 1 person
I’m having to chuckle now. The poem wrote itself. Guess it was formed from the contents of my mind.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Lovely, passionate, sensual.
LikeLike
I blame it on that challenge last week. Started me on a new trend. For which I ought to thank Entangled for the challenge
And thank you for liking it
LikeLiked by 1 person
A wonderful picture Crispina and the poem, oh my God! I love the verses and the colours, it seems, are talking! The feeling is beautiful π
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you, Ramyani. Sometimes inspiration takes us, and we just have to follow
LikeLiked by 1 person
Absolutely!
LikeLiked by 1 person
π
LikeLike
Love it, a great poem.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you… π
LikeLiked by 1 person
My pleasure.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Beautiful! ππΈ
LikeLike
Thank you. Don’t know how I’ve missed this one till now π
LikeLiked by 1 person
You had a lot of comments that day, you were busy. Mine was small. So you you were bound to miss it.
LikeLiked by 1 person
I was busy on twitter too. You have to participate else you don’t get the follows. And those follows are getting me sales.
LikeLiked by 1 person
π
LikeLiked by 1 person
I meant Opportunity knocked for you! You have such great photos. Would you like to share one or two at the Saddle Up Saloon?
LikeLiked by 1 person
I did see you’re looking for graphics. I’ll take a closer look. But do I or don’t I, I thank you for the thought and the offer π
LikeLiked by 1 person
I love your photos. Also I thought of you for an upcoming saloon event. I want to have a virtual walking tour where people provide a picture from a regular or favorite walk and maybe a short poem that goes with it. This is something you do every week at your site, but I’d like to at least link to one of your walks.
LikeLiked by 1 person
I can’t commit right at this moment. But I can say you’re welcome to link to any of my posts, photos, poems, anything. I’ll give it more thought tomorrow. Right now I’ve got tweets coming through. DMs coming through, emails, comments… some days are like that. And I need to go do the washing up!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Oh look who is on a romantic poetry roll! π
Love this a lot!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you. You’re an influence on me. I shan’t say a bad one.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you for that sweet compliment! π I truly am honored!
LikeLiked by 1 person
And it is sincerely said. But you know that
LikeLiked by 1 person
I do. π
LikeLiked by 1 person
I love the photo and the writing even more so!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you, Tien. I seem to have scored a hit on this one. Ironic, it just came to me. I just penned it. Didn’t need to work it.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Writing from heart sometimes produces very relatable and moving works π
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you, Tien. Great, isn’t it, the way the words pop out of us
LikeLiked by 1 person
It sure is, ma’am
LikeLiked by 1 person
π
LikeLiked by 1 person
It sure is, ma’am!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Delightful!
LikeLike
Thank you. I do confess to being pleased with it
LikeLike
Nicely managed.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you. π
LikeLiked by 1 person
What a different take on the prompt. β€ I love the poem !
LikeLike
Thank you. Sometimes inspiration blossoms and insists on expression
LikeLiked by 1 person
I can’t agree better.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Lovely Crispina π
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you π
LikeLiked by 1 person
ππ
LikeLiked by 1 person
One could really, genuinely do that to the rose if they had liquid nitrogen!
LikeLiked by 1 person
I thank you for that thought. I hope you don’t intend to do that with my heart as well? π π π
LikeLiked by 1 person
I’m usually a heartbreaker. Comes with being so sexy. π
LikeLiked by 1 person
KNow what you mean π
LikeLiked by 1 person