I thought I saw an elfin troop
Their banners flying high
Banging on their elfin drums
Drubbing hearts that wandered by
Off to fight an elfin battle
All upon foot and none upon saddle
Saw the fairy troop they met
Fairies from the marshland wet
I thought I saw the hidden ones
The hour be shot with sun
I thought them spun from herbal seeds
But then I blinked and they were reeds
Written for Crimson’s Creative Challenge #38
Love this one.
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Thank you, Padre. I confess to a feeling of chuffedness, aka satisfaction.
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You should feel chuffed. This is wonderful, Crispina.
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I thank you, Dale. I’ve found a direct line to Shakespeare. He’s mentoring me. TIC. 🙂
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Lucky you!
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Trouble is, the connect is erratic. Sometimes it’s there. Sometimes it’s not. Celebrate the day, hey.
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Absolutely! We do what we can when we can!
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And we scrubble over the inbetween pieces. 🙂
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That we do
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Wonderful!
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I thank you. I enjoyed the write 🙂
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Lovely poem.
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I thank you muchly 🙂
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Delightfully Delightful! Thank you! 😊🌾
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As I’ve said, enjoyed writing it 🙂
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It made me think of the delight I have had. Today I’ll try. You inspired me. Thank you 🙂
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Hey, some good comes of it. 🙂
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BIG SMILES! and another Thank You. 🙂
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🙂
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I’m so impressed at the creativity of this – the elfin banners? From that picture? Absolutely stunning.
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Some might suspect I already have my take in mind when I post the photo. I do not. And I posted this one. And I looked. And I looked. And … it come to me.
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Either way, loved it.
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I sincerely thank you. 🙂
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Having just been reading some of Yeats’ work on Irish myths and legends, I think this could fit right in.
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Well, I have read, but I haven’t feasted on Yeats for years. Rather, I’d blame it on Shakespeare: alliteration, assonance, etc
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Oh, right, blame the dead white male, why don’t ya? 😉
Actually, I’ve been having a Shakespearean week myself. Last Sunday, we went to see an outside performance of Hamlet, this Sunday it will be Cymbeline, and in the meantime, I’m still working my way through the sonnets.
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Oh the sonnets. Much overlooked by me. Now you make me feel guilty.
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Don’t worry. Even though I’m reading them at the rate of one a day, I’m still finding them the least exciting Shakespeare I’ve read. And I’ve read “Pericles, Prince of Tyre.”
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I haven’t your discipline. I dig in at random when I fancy a break from C21st living.
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Probably the best choice.
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Wonderful, loved it.
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Pleased. Thank you. 🙂
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My pleasure dear.
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This is a lovely poem ! Made me smile.
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For which I am pleasured. And for adding the comment 🙂
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This made me smile so good.
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And your comment now is making me smile. I thank you.
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It’s such a great poem! ✨💓😀
(P.S. I missed your CCC this week 😔 but I would be back next week 😁)
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Look forward to whatever you post, then.
And thanks for liking the poem. Thought it might appeal to you.
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I absolutely love magic and fantasy! Thank you for giving me a thought! 😃✨😀😔💓
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That’s what I do … or I hope to
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And I think you are already doing great in it… 😃✨💕
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I thank you 🙂
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Warm regards to you!
How is the weather like in your place?
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The heat wave has gone. Back to the usual British summer … sun broken by intermittent showers. If anything, the temperatures are down. Good walking weather. And you?
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There must be beautiful flowers?
Are you going to any vacation?
We are having lots of rain.
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I would like to get away, but it’s not going to happen. So I just enjoy my days out, walking. A vacation would be walking, the same, but in a different area. I used to enjoy going to the southern counties … plenty of hills. Norfolk is notoriously flat (not entirely true, but our hills aren’t high, though they can be amazingly steep).
Umbrella time, hey?
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Have you ever thought about writing folk songs Crispina – I think you’ve got a real talent for capturing that folky atmosphere in your poems.
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I have music playing from first wake to last call. Mostly it’s folk music. Omnia, Damh the Bard, Faun, Wardruna, Heilung. I like that I can’t understand half the words. Less distracting when writing. But I guess it acts as a kind of metronome.
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Don’t blink!
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Yea. 🙂
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This is wonderful! Made me think of Tolkien… 🙂
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Yea, I think I might have been thinking of Tolkien too. Or Shakespeare?
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